I Kissed Her Then Died

I Kissed Her Then Died

A Poem by PoeticFury
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Fantasy

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As I gazed into her eyes.

I wanted her lips to touch mine so bad, but I felt so nervous.

Therefore my plan of attack had to be revised.

As I tried to read her body movement like a book I knew then that my chance may not come again.


..That is if I did not try.

Though the butterflies I felt inside as they made my stomach their home instead of sit all they can do is fly.

What I wanted to do I knew that is was no lie, but rejection was my enemy I made into doubt.


Should I run and hide?

I had to compromise.

She won my heart with her smile which scored the Nobel Peace Prize I just hope my heart does not end up into just that..... A piece......


She had a the perfect face.....

The perfect waist …

Did I mention she had the personality with an instant kill of emotions of all types knocks you dead.

.Fatality


I recall when she pushed over closer she took over the the show, the moment she needed no music cause it was playing in my veins cause they felt like string being plucked and she was the composer.


As the clouds moved away she put my arm around her shoulder.

As she ask me to hold her I guess she got colder.

As a result those feelings got bolder.

With each second going by I asked myself should I do this.

Repeatably over and over.


As I put my hand on her chin and moved to her face I locked her lips with mine and her body got tight like a lighting bolt.

Strike and hit.

Again I placed.. Felt the movement of her body as my hands sat on her waist.


Off her lips love was the first thing I taste.

At that time I realized I kissed her and died, but I am living here I am breathing I survived.

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© 2011 PoeticFury


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THE WAY YOU DRAG THIS ON PURPOSE AS IF YOU WANTED IT THAT WAY AS I READ THIS VERSE...COMING TO THE CLIMAX OF THE VERSE ABOUT HIM EXPLAINING HIS PLEDGE FOR HER AND THEN THE MOMENT OF TRUTH COMES AND YOU END THIS WITH THE KISS OF HIS PASSION IN THE LINES...

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Heaven has no fury like a writer with emotion. I love writing more than I love life. Why? Cause writing is my life, and without it I have no life. I enjoy music, and meeting new people. Also like most.. more..

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