Judgement Day

Judgement Day

A Poem by PoeticFury
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There is a day where we will all have to face it, so that was the point of it

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Whenever this day comes the ways of the world will come to an end.
The good will finally prevail plus a life that will consists of no sin.
Where we will finally meet our maker.To find out where we will forever lay our soul.In heaven?Or thefiery depths of hells.Where we find out if we have no worry or fear of the undertaker.
It does not matter if you or goth, know that people will pay for the way that they may have you feeling.When that day comes they will have to focus on all that they got.
Even for the emo go ahead I won't stop you if you have to scream though. The way we all are is a way of life. No need to be sad and hide. When the time comes the naysayers of your ways may have to suffer you know who decides.
Even the angels or any combination of the three spread your wings and fly away as far as the eyes can see. No need to worry don't rush the day it's not good to hurry.
That is why I wish we come around and live for each other instead of all for one. Live for the here and now don't hurt live for what is worth because for everyone may realize it on this earth and change at least one way.
On the month of ??/??/????
You have to remember for all of us there is a Judgement Day....

© 2011 PoeticFury


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Or so we're made to believe. We actually judge self, creating Heaven and Hell. I believe God loves unconditionally no matter what our flaws. I would suggest the structure of this poetic justice need fine tuning. An even flow. It is, in all, a good read. Love to hear from our youth and how they perceive this world neither just nor unjust.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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