No Distinction

Mere droplets of water, yet very heavy
Everybody get out of the way, be weary
The rain is hitting, and it hold no query
It doesn’t matter if your a man, woman, or a baby.
The rain will hit you squarely

The source of all life, water.
It gives us all that’s needed to survive, but why bother?
We struggle everyday for survival,
But in the flip side, there are those who slaughter
Man, woman, or baby, no distinction
Destroying life here and there, no confliction
“Oh we need this and that, it’s near extinct here”
“Where do we get it?”
“Oh take it from whoever, no distinction”
Greed has got a hold of us, not discriminating
Creating war upon war, never ending
Spilling the blood of humans, no distinction


Can we not be happy with what we have?
Do we always have to go and grab?
All these wars lead to more corpses and scars
Eventually the whole world will be in strife
So who do I choose to blame? The greed.

The greed will lead to our extinction
All humans in the world... just gone.

No distinction.

Author's Note

I don't know own anything about poetry, but I do want to improve it. Please be blunt

Reviews

[Haydar]

A very nice poem from someone with a short amount of experience but I believe that it is a tad morbid with the blood spilt but it also reflects our world so a truly beautiful piece please check out mine as well

[Darasi]

I wanted it to be a little dark lool.. thanks for the review.. I'll definitly check out you're writing when you post one