A lot of thoughts shared in the words.
"All Ways
Remain,
and the vision of you,
With me in the windy ocean "
I liked the above lines. Wishes and memories. We will know many. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
This is a beautiful peace of work. The amount of emotion put is excuted prefectly. The rhyming in this poem is priceless. There are not many words, but it makes worth while for some beautiful meaning.
Good poem. You do wrote the emotion from your heart to your words. Just a suggestion, you have the right to own the poem. Just do not forget how the readers would feel also. Some lines are truly great to relate in general but some are vague. Keep writing. :)
A lot of thoughts shared in the words.
"All Ways
Remain,
and the vision of you,
With me in the windy ocean "
I liked the above lines. Wishes and memories. We will know many. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
I write what I feel with honesty, and integrity. I love art in all it's forms, especially poetry and multi-media. I love to read, watch movies, play music, and study comparative mythology. I hope to o.. more..