Yesterday was Too Day

Yesterday was Too Day

A Poem by modtoddinc
"

Deeply Felt, experienced and Thought Over

"
In the moment
I found you,
Spilled

I flowed

Word
Feeling First,
Action Third,

Thoughts of All,
Make my World;
Together you and I
Are child...

Raised
Sun
Moon
Rainbow,

Halo.

The Goddess came to me in three,
But I lost her through ignorance and ego

Yet I return,
Humbled.
Grateful.
More in Love than ever...

BEFORE!

To dream
Of you
My Dear,
My Sweet,

Forever will I KEEP,

Music
Flow
Glow
and Pain.

All Ways
Remain,
and the vision of you,
With me in the windy ocean

Motion
For, WORD

Explained.

Returned.

TRWJ-4-14-17

© 2017 modtoddinc


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A lot of thoughts shared in the words.
"All Ways
Remain,
and the vision of you,
With me in the windy ocean "
I liked the above lines. Wishes and memories. We will know many. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is a beautiful peace of work. The amount of emotion put is excuted prefectly. The rhyming in this poem is priceless. There are not many words, but it makes worth while for some beautiful meaning.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Good poem. You do wrote the emotion from your heart to your words. Just a suggestion, you have the right to own the poem. Just do not forget how the readers would feel also. Some lines are truly great to relate in general but some are vague. Keep writing. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


you are spilling out your heart

Posted 7 Years Ago


A lot of thoughts shared in the words.
"All Ways
Remain,
and the vision of you,
With me in the windy ocean "
I liked the above lines. Wishes and memories. We will know many. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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modtoddinc
modtoddinc

Tacoma, WA



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I write what I feel with honesty, and integrity. I love art in all it's forms, especially poetry and multi-media. I love to read, watch movies, play music, and study comparative mythology. I hope to o.. more..

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