Line Cook

Starting Over

That old forgotten line cook,

stinky, dirty b*****d; dog.

his beer smells stale as he's a prince who's never been a frog.

That forgotten Rock-n-Roller,

funky, dirty b*****d; god.

S**t sells like nothing faster, and he's a demi-hog.

Then, the 'ol diss: 'I understand your passion.'

creative under standin' in a most persuasive sway,

not then... not now... but with-in... you... yet to be...

Full. and Filled.

Ware, the Jeanie-in-the-bottle,

tasted. full. and ripe,

these are the consequences

being the sharpest of all blades,

Life.

Reviews

[Ben Noah Suri]

A different and interesting style of writing...

[Double T]

Great poem. The first time read it, i didn't understand it. But now that I have read it a second time, I completly understand it.

[Coyote Poetry]

I have known a few line cooks. Good and fun people to have known. I like the use of the language and the good description shared. Thank you my friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[wordman]

very interesting write ! i enjoyed the read ..

[guy drori]

I liked the rhyming and also the very ending... Which you ended with a very strong word.