Earth Day Art

A poem on Earth Day

Third star

Full of purest water

Save the graves for tomorrow's sorrow;

This strange remembrance

Be of certain freshness and always... All ways,

Grant the greenness and succumb to the sweetness

Be one of these natures to nurture the bees who work so hard to bring you honey

Forget About the

Absolutist and publicist behind the curtain hem

For they are only Oz

Not the great boss, on a Round table sphere

Such precious dirt;

Tell me the truth of your worth

Four of these directions and twice the polar opposite; the horizontals...

 The attitude of latitudes

In the fifth dimension… towards

Our futile and enigmatic future,

Quantum me into exhibition of existence,

It’s a life beyond buzz and the cowboy

A follow through

The black holes into heaven on Earth

The precious state of

Our granted and desperate birth

Author's Note

Reviews

[Brittany Zedalis]

"Forget About the
Absolutist and publicist behind the curtain hem
For they are only Oz"

Ah! I love those lines so much it's ridiculous! Hahaha.
This is a really wonderful read. I love poetry related to nature and everything. ^-^

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome Earth day tribute poem. Great work my friend :)

[sereenaoutloud]

always love your song choice to go with your writes..they add to you already beautifully penned pieces.
This is a perfect for Earth day!

[wordman]

a great write for earth day my friend

[dan]

Todd, This piece is very well thought out, in certain parts it leaned toward the ethereal in terms of how to reconcile some word combinations...so I read it for the second time and caught the drift of what I believe was your message. Your use of the occasional internal rhymes (what I call it when the rhyme does not occur with just the final words in a line, but within the second line EARLIER than the end) and your wordplay requires thought to figure it out...like I did with my second read. The ONLY thing I would do differently would be to make the autoplay song Black Hole Sun instead of Creep. I listened to Creep while reading it the first time and played Black Hole Sun for my second read. They are really close in how they mesh with your words, I just liked BHS a bit more. A very thought-provoking piece, very well done. take care...dan

[Jamestown]

Very nice write! Nature described very well and unique:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Maumil Mehraj]

"Be one of these natures to nurture the bees who work so hard to bring you honey"
I had a big smile on my face while reading this poem....you explained nature with such brilliance, good job, sir!
And i love how you introduced Earth as the "third star"
Lovely!
~Maumil