The One

A quick write poem. (I like to write in the spur of the moment somtimes in order to capture the feelings and mood instantly.)

The one who believes,
Thinks he receives
But really what is that?
Remarkable artifacts....
The truth is know,
But the world is show...
To truly understand,
A man must stand
... Completely alone.
Yet loneliness
Destroys all the toys
Completing the puzzle
Of the individuals muzzle
As much as a man
Can,
Impose his will
Among,
There is no plan
To sing the song
Sung
Hanging
Dangling
Mingling
Something
If life is to become
From the unmentioned Sun,
Then All is the plan
For, however he stands.

TRJ, 1/13

Reviews

[Dejene]

This is really good. It made me think and brought up some very valid points about life. Tge first line is great. I can't get it out of my mind. I also Love what you did with the structure. Very nice.