Simple words

in love with the music from author's note

Can’t stop seeing

How the universe exhales

Soft beauty freeing

From incongruous parades

The lonely atoms,

That are hunting for delight,

Those graceful phantoms

That shimmer in the night…

And when it will inhale

Will all the roads come back to me?

And everything that seemed so frail

Will finally make me see

Where lays the strength.

And when I think that I know

What comes after another breath;

Time is showing me what was fast is now slow

Waiting for the next exhale…

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

“Graceful phantoms that shimmer in the night”... beautiful poetry and Art with music of the moon and stars ... define the Universe and beyond... dear Ana B. Gently, Pat

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Patricia :)

[Falcon1]

Great writers show such promise it is close I see one in you my dear Ann B.

[Ana B.]

Thank you :)

[barleygirl]

I love this poem! Good combination of music, art, & writing. Altho I felt like I was flying thru the universe as I read this, I also was aware that your words could be an analogy for humans in the abstract. Nicely lyrical & uplifting (((HUGS))) fondly, Margie

[Ana B.]

Thank you so much Margie :)

[LylaCrystal]

Every poem of yours I have read until now makes me think that they are a celebration of poetry. You are among the best poets I have met. :)

~Lyla

[Ana B.]

That's amazing! Thank you for the kind words dear Lyla!

[LylaCrystal]

Your welcome dear Ana!

[Donicca Dona L]

''And when I think that I know

What comes after another breath;

Time is showing me what was fast is now slow...''

we actually think we know what tomorrow brings , but we don't we have just an expectation of it on our mind. But I am glad '' I know nothing about, life surprise me always''.

I really love this one. simply beautiful.

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much :)

[apennylate]

Stunning... Easily breathed... Simple meter, combined with passionate word choice left my chest going up and down, line by line... Very nicely penned...

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Silente :)

[apennylate]

Most welcome... Love this violin you posted, as well... I am sucker for that stuff... Keep writing that flow...!

[Ana B.]

haha thank you again :)

[CookieMisfit1969]

I love the misty and magical theme. It's as if time slowed and life became more visible. :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much :)

[Giulia King]

Amazing job as always, Ana! I love your poems

[Ana B.]

Thank you Gullia :)

[Lorry]

I see why you love that music, it envelops you in thought and mesmerises with images and senses flashing into life and letting your mind float into the music, becoming one and hearing the rhythm of life that is always there, yet seldom heard.
Beautiful words.

[Ana B.]

Thank you :) Music was always my inspiration

[Coyote Poetry]

Dear Ana. Powerful and logical journey in your words. You create places and realistic thoughts in your words. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Ana B.]

Thank you dear John :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Ana.