Omnipresence

I wish I knew how to savor

This eternal odyssey of mind.

That nictitating , addictive flavor

Left the recesses of my heart entwined…

 

And on my way to awe

I got lost in the beauty…

Unknowingly following the law

That lights up the universe so smoothly;

 

That the ageless watchers of the storm

Have indolently inhaled,

Helping ‘’the unthinkable’’ gain a form

And ‘’the unknown’’ to be unveiled.

 

Will that silky glimpse of truth

Teach how to disappear completely?

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Jes' Pi]

Ok, aceasta este prima recenzie in romana pe care o fac aici, deci… Da!
Un sentiment mai ciudat s-a aprins inauntrul meu si am simtit ca trebuie sa fac aceasta recenzie in romana =)))

Revenind, Ai niste poeme foarte deep, descrii totul intr-un mod remarcabil si mi-a placut intotdeauna ce imagini ai ales.

Mi-a placut foarte mult si acest poem, bineinteles. L-am citit de mai multe ori si sentimentul meu nu s-a schimbat in privinta poemului.
Deci, da!:))
Felicitari.

100/100

[Ana B.]

haha multumesc frumos, dar de ce ai decis sa faci aceasta recenzie anume in limba romana? Sunt curioasa))) Nici nu am avut idee ca sunt vorbitori de limba romana aici? sau ai folosit google translate? In orice caz, iti multumoesc foarte mult pentru aceste cuvinte uimitoare :)

[Jes' Pi]

Google translate e cel mai mare fail cand trebuie sa traduci ceva :))))))

Nu m-am gandit la aceasta recenzie sa o fac anume in romana, ci pur si simplu am zis sa incerc sa comunic cu romanii de aici =))
Stiam de mai de mult ca esti romanca(sau Moldova?nu mai stiu exact) si am zis sa sparg gheata =)))
Multumesc si eu :)

[Ana B.]

Da, sunt din Moldova. Tu de unde esti si de unde m astii? Sunt curioasa :)

[Jes' Pi]

Când ai intrat pe site ai scris că esti din Moldova, iar acest lucru m-a făcut să îți trimit o cerere de prietenie. :) eu sunt din Ardeal :D

[Ana B.]

Haha am inteles)))

[Jes' Pi]

Poate putem face o colaborare..într-o zi

[Ana B.]

Poate, cu totate ca eu sunt mai mult solo-writer....nu prea imi ies colaborarile :)

[Jes' Pi]

Poate va ieși un haos remarcabil

[apennylate]

You taught me a new word... "Nictitating "... Haha, this was an elegant write, from word choice to the mythical pressure felt... It almost felt like watching a storm roll in, reading this... Smoothly penned....

[Ana B.]

haha, thank you Silente :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I wish I knew too...

So many great phrases in this write. About those last lines I would say it depends if one really wants to. You can be there and yet not be, I guess.
Beautifully penned, Ana.

[Ana B.]

Thank you dear Yumna :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome, Ana. A pleasure always.
P.S. your name always reminds me of the movie "Frozen" 😛😊

[Ana B.]

hahaha, really? That's funny, i heard people mentioning that a few times :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

well of course you must have ;P ;)

[Island Hippy]

Aloha Ana, you write mesmerizing words. I feel a bit thick to be honest as meaning sometimes escapes me. What I think is that there are sometimes several paths to a destination (happiness & the truth) and those paths are a different experience and depending where you're coming from the truth can be a bit foggy.
I love the words "on my way to awe" that is a lovely thing to realize. Omnipresence; such a fitting title! Mahalo for your lovely poetry Ana. Izzy

[Ana B.]

Thank you for the wonderful words sweet Izzy :)

[B]

I miss all your work
I am not sure if i got the message
but i feel this is a piece about truth
appearing and disappearing
as it reaches its correct place to rest within a good mind
the gift of seeing the truth is not endowed on all of us equally .... you have to be free of judgement and bias

well done
very soulful

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much :)

[Lorry]

This is pretty damn awesome from the title onwards. The first lines set the tone perfectly with such a thought provoking image as tasting the journey we take and the decisions that make them so. They also make me think that that is what memory is for, to play those flavours back to us once the journey has been made. Would the journey have changed if we had stopped to follow the flavours at the time? Who knows, but I do like the flavour theme, as so many of our memories are attached to other senses.
On the way to awe is such a beautiful, yet simple statement, like it is said as an afterthought, while discussing something else, yet you must have known you were on your way there, right? :)
The ending is beautiful and it reminds me of the word ephemera, which is used to mean inconsequential or not worthy, when my blind spot in the brain tells me that it should mean omnipresent, all encompassing....but that's just how my head works. :)
Love it.

[Ana B.]

That is a beautiful review. Thank you dear Nemonomore. :)

[Lorry]

Well, it's all about what you wrote....so well done :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i hope this poet (you) will not disappear completely---your words are rich in content and visuals...

there are different paths to the truth and different paths to happiness...

we find ourselves wandering off the path, but then find our way back---and in the end, hopefully are able to answer some of the questions of life in general, and in our own lives.

[Ana B.]

Thank you for the wonderful words dear Jacob. I agree completely - there are different paths to the truth and therefore to hapiness

[Muse]

Oooh radio head. A real favorite of mine. Try this website; it's been years since I've used it or wrote anything, but it's how you auto play: http://www.vtubetools.com/

I love your words with the art work too.

"That nictitating , addictive flavor"

Great stuff!

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much for reading dear matches player :)