Omnipresence

I wish I knew how to savor

This eternal odyssey of mind.

That nictitating , addictive flavor

Left the recesses of my heart entwined…

 

And on my way to awe

I got lost in the beauty…

Unknowingly following the law

That lights up the universe so smoothly;

 

That the ageless watchers of the storm

Have indolently inhaled,

Helping ‘’the unthinkable’’ gain a form

And ‘’the unknown’’ to be unveiled.

 

Will that silky glimpse of truth

Teach how to disappear completely?

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Falcon1]

enjoy all you have to say in a poetry way

[Ana B.]

i am enjoying, thank you

[Harley Quinn]

You have wonderful way with words. I love your writing. Keep up the great work.

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much :)

[rowan.taylorrr]

i really enjoyed reading this piece. good job, i love it !!

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much XOXO

[Patrick]

'and on my way to awe i got lost in beauty'
great wording - still working out the poem but i'm blaming my fried brain and tired eyes - not your ability, Great read

[Ana B.]

Thank you Patrick :)

[Rassoul]

Another wonderful piece of writing!
Well done.

[Ana B.]

Thank you Rassoul :)

[Rassoul]

You're so welcomed, Ana.

[Coyote Poetry]

Easy to get lost. Hard to forget.
"And on my way to awe
I got lost in the beauty…
Unknowingly following the law
That lights up the universe so smoothly;"
The above lines stood out for me. To be lost in the perfection of beauty. A needed place to know. Thank you Ana for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ana B.]

Thank you for the beautiful words John :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Ana.

[duff]

This is beautifully constructed. Intellectually stimulating and moving.

"Unknowingly following the law
That lights up the universe so smoothly;

i really like that line. Great work.

[Ana B.]

Thank you duff! :)

[duff]

You're very welcome!

[emmajoy]

' And on my way to awe ~ I got lost in the beauty…'

to feel like that, to attain such emotion is head-reeling, heart-storming.. it is Everything. Perhaps it's akin to reincarnation, returning each time to attain that richer, kinder, generous point.. and one's spirit is absorbed in light absolute. And, thus - disappear, but, willingly
Perhaps?

[Ana B.]

Willingly indeed, because, in this particular instance (my writing) disappearing means a complete and utter change of every particle of the body and soul. An ascendance. Where different laws work and the mind is everywhere but nowhere (hence the title)... Thank you for stopping by dear friend :)

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Lovely and lyrical. Imagery that holds the reader in thrall. Whisps of gossamer. The formless aspiring to form. Yes, "this eternal odyssey of mind"...Stellar.

[Ana B.]

Thank you for the wonderful words Annette :)

[sinNsincerity]

Such a killer opener, "I wish I knew how to savor
This eternal odyssey of mind." I just loved this.
I always admire your vocab. and word choice and how your poems always take me adrift.
Awesome write Ana!

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much David :)