A day

And once more, the Sun shines,

Carefully arranging my dream in 10 preludes

Gifting wings to a ruminative mind

And substance to those bohemian moods…

 

Escaped again

From this psychological earthquake

So habitual in this land of man

That is unceasingly eager to partake

 

In foreign fantasies.

What else is new though…

Always fond of tragedies

 Those quaint souls aglow…

 

… I wonder how long have  I stayed

In this lovely, transcendental rain…

10 preludes till that dream will fade

And once more, the Moon will shine again.

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Falcon1]

I love dream like poetry such as this one here quit the read dear Ann B. so rear.

[Ana B.]

Thank you dear, but its Ana, without double ''n''

[Barnaby]

Nice poetry nothing complicated but easy on the ears... Enjoyed it

[Ana B.]

Thank you Barnaby :)

[Mustafa]

nice poem with sophisticated thoughts and words, complex ideas,great job

[Ana B.]

Thank you :)

[emmajoy]

' .. how long have I stayed ~ In this lovely, transcendental rain…'

Time shapes our lives if we allow it, don't you think? Seems you have the means to escape where you want when the need nudges. I feel as if I've happily walked in your shadow, seeing what's there to be seen and absorbed. Beautiful words, calming, inviting and yet, strangely invigorating..
..

[Ana B.]

Thank you for the joyful Emma :)

[Ana B.]

oops, it seems i skipped the word ''words'' in my thank you note :)

[emmajoy]

Smiling, i do that all the time, have also been known to call a fRiend a fIend!!!

[Ana B.]

lol, that's funny :) wanna be flends? :D

[emmajoy]

Oh, yes... and now for me to sleep with smiles sleeping alongside. Will have such happy dreams tonight, thank you. x

[writ rajat]

You are the example of both beautiful face and poetry

[Ana B.]

haha, thank you

[The Exiled Wolf]

I appreciate the spiritual transcendence flowing through the piece - it keeps me re-reading this piece again and again to dig deeper and deeper. The word choice is stunning. I like how you describe the disturbing crowds as a "psychological earthquake". Marvelous piece!

[Ana B.]

Thank you for the beautiful review Wolf :)

[duff]

There is crazy depth here. Layers to peel back and reexamine. Enchanting imagery lingering with questions of is this a dream or reality? I'm probably way off but it's intriguing material that seems to have plenty of possibility below the surface. Very cool read Ana.

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Duff :)

[duff]

You are most welcome. It was a pleasure:)

[Chris]

I a l w a y s appreciate your choice of background...
the mood fits your thoughts like a glove.

[Ana B.]

Thank you dear Chris.

[Writtenabyss]

Amazing poem thank you for sharing

[Ana B.]

Thank you!

[Writtenabyss]

Your welcome don't stop you are a very good writter.

[Ana B.]

thank you for such a wonderful thing to say.

[Writtenabyss]

I mean it you are a excellent writer and could go really far if you keep it up

[Devinked7115]

Sounds like a zone out to me. =)

An escape from the world and a dive towards reality's hidden meaning.

It's that moment you wake up everyday and shower positive thoughts to commence anything.
=)

[Ana B.]

haha,thank you very much :)