Archeus - is also called the Anima Mundi, Soul of the World, Spirit of the World, The Transitive LVX, The Path of Saturn (connecting Malkuth and Yesod in the system of Jewish mysticism called the Kabbalah), the Earth Sphere and the Zone Girdling the Earth. It is also sometimes simply called the lower astral sphere, or the "geographic" region of it, as everything in the Archeus parallels physical manifestation.
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Your philosophical message is not fully understood by a simpleton like me, but I love your amazing word-crafting! "living in our homemade jail" (a startlingly honest observation) . . . and "throwing digital daggers" (again, so brilliantly stated!) I very much dislike living in "a culture of fear" which has become even more exaggerated in the USA since the 2016 election. So much to think about here! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
haha, I agree, it's hard to live in such a world. Thank you dear Margie :)
A very solemn and profound piece of poetry, you got here. It really speaks about an important matter. My only qualm is that I'm not sure the title is right for it, for such a title gives the impression that it's about something deeper, more philosophical that what it's implying (even the artwork at the bottom adds to that effect). It's a good poem as is, I just don't find the sense in the title, and that the title could itself headline a whole other poem you could write.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thank you for your thoughts Emipoemi. Perhaps you're right. I chose this title because these are the.. read moreThank you for your thoughts Emipoemi. Perhaps you're right. I chose this title because these are the thoughts that are crawling in my head just before the sun is up....a contemplation right before the sunrise, so for me, the title relates completely. Thank you for stopping by :)
In cyberworld, genuine fellowship and even the sincerity of the common handshake have no relevance, a quasi, artificial existence bereft of human endeavour and kindred spirit!
A finely penned philosophical, poetic analogy, with a concluding and compromising, common dominator were none shall escape!
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Indeed, some of us are very impatient for it, i would even say eager to have the final meeting, beca.. read moreIndeed, some of us are very impatient for it, i would even say eager to have the final meeting, because its the only sure way to find out what's out there. Thank you Tom :)
of course...it is something i have no power over. Or anybody else for that matter.
7 Years Ago
The one great leveller, but nothing to fear or feel verbose over if the heart is pure and soul is ri.. read moreThe one great leveller, but nothing to fear or feel verbose over if the heart is pure and soul is righteous!
"Throwing digital daggers..." such a brilliant line. "Up all night and party all day" oops, that's was a motto in a younger life, lol. Anot her wonderful write Ana.
I liked the words and thoughts. Artwork is beautiful also. The statements in the poem made the reader think and ponder. Life, actions and ending. Please we must learn and understand.
"And in this culture of fear
How talented is death -
The true sincerity’s emir
To whom we’re not afraid to confess"
The above lines. Solid and true. Thank you Ana for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
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