Andromeda

Keep drinking your wine

From my heart.

Bellow the waterline

Lays the gaiety - badly scarred…

 

Aren’t we all a little lost?

And accidental poets…

Feeding sorrow to the hungry ghosts

Of the long asleep nobles

 

Serving as reminder…

A residue of greatness…

Was really the world much kinder

When breaths were aimless…

Hate was faceless…

Love was blameless…

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Nicholas Shea]

Your poems remind me of a fresh spring rain. I don't know why your words are so crisp and alive. Another great write!

[Ana B.]

Thank you for the kind word dear Nicholas :)

[Adam Adams]

and, as always, you still ain't stop fueling my heart with such passion of love (toward poetry).

rationing of words's very good here at your work with the depth of your "deepen" thoughts that you always carry along with you.. somewhere across the hitshell broadway of your bold mind. quite intriguing! let's take a look at some of my fav. lines:

"Aren’t we all a little lost?
And accidental poets…"

how true.
lady, you speak allot in an ink, in a very lil droplets of majestic words. "accidental poets" is definitely a very nice compulsion of your thoughts.

alongside, "faceless hate" and "blameless and so RECKLESS love" is what kept Andromeda drinking wine from the heart. quite eye-catching it is! nicely done, though. great job!

[Ana B.]

:) aren't we all a little tempted to get drunk from that wine though? kidding :) Thank you for the passionate and most amazing response to my writing !!

[Davidgeo]

You're very good at this.

Put together nicely, perfectly as far as I'm concerned. The dream like intro sound of that radio head video at the end, it's a nice touch.

I would of used a Tool song, the one with Henry Rollins in it.
You did better though.

You're very good at this.

[Ana B.]

Thank you for stopping by, HJ :) You are very generous. Maybe I will use Tool, because i loove the band and i wrote many poems under that specific music.
Thank you again.

[Davidgeo]

HJ's are usually known to be the stingy part of that act.

[Ana B.]

oh..........

[Davidgeo]

For serious though, you did an excellent job. The picture you included was perfect. Made it all perfect... well done. I'm not used to being generous, apologies.

[Ana B.]

I apologize if my abbreviation was offensive.

[Davidgeo]

* see the thing 2 comments above (quick responder... don't forget to perfect cpr)

[Ana B.]

hahaha, jumped the gun eh? i always wanted to use cpr, but the chance never arises

[Davidgeo]

You should never WANT to use CPR... but you should make sure you very effectively CAN!! employ CPR and other emergency procedures.... should the need arise. Saving lives is important, if only on a lark or wishful moment. Your want on this matter is something to be appreciated however.

[Ana B.]

fair point well made :)