Underwater

Eyes closed. Even the peace is mute

I wonder if that’s how death sounds …

Yet most likely it’s my mind’s tired platitude

Hovering behind my unruly thoughts…

 

Bubbly piano in perfect harmony

Cluing me in about what I fail to see -

The undecipherable beauty’s astronomy

That makes this existence to be

 

Comely...

Mystique…

Ending abruptly

When hearts learn how to speak…

And like a fire bird

I spread my wings

Completely unconcerned..

Tickled by the wind…

 

Embracing the flames -

The next level’s portal

Leaving this familiar domains

And this  body that’s fragile and  mortal

 

But my thoughts will never be.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[S.P.GORAI]

Nicely written............................

[Ana B.]

Thank you :)

[MinorArt]

This was exquisite, truly

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

beautiful......brilliant.....

"And like a fire bird
I spread my wings
Embracing the flames "

loved it!!!
:)

[Ana B.]

Thank you Pushkar :)

[jonah]

Hey, Anna. This is a nice poem. I really wonder when the hearts actually learn to speak. It's a mysterious time.

[Ana B.]

Thank you for stopping by, Jonah :)

[anne]

a lovely creation...thoughts stays forever...:))

[Ana B.]

Thanks my dear :))

[Misery]

Another finely woven work from a beautiful mind. The transition in this poem felt so smooth and natural as it was being read. Nicely crafted, dear Ana.

[Ana B.]

Thank you dear Kevin :) You are very kind

[Misery]

You are welcome, Ana. Wishing you continued inspiration.

[Isabel]

Wow Ana you have such a way with words! "Embracing the flames..." Now that's a line that hit me all at once. Nice piece!

[Ana B.]

Thank you Maria!

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

And like a fire bird
I spread my wings
Completely unconcerned..
Tickled by the wind…

Beautiful stanza and excellent poetry, Ana, well done. :) Rudi

[Ana B.]

Thank you Rudi :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Your Underwater took me into the immortal world of thoughts and imagery. Thanks for sharing this friend :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you for the beautiful words Skyfall :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Pleasure all mine :) Welcome Ana

[Coyote Poetry]

Gentle flow of thoughts gave life to the beautiful artwork.
"Comely...
Mystique…
Ending abruptly
When hearts learn how to speak…"
The above lines, I liked the most. You took the reader on a final journey with strong description and detail. Thank you Ana for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Ana B.]

Thank you for the warm thoughts dear John.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Ana.