Hue

a WRATH compilation

My mind’s ecstasy

Veiled behind the armies of mordacity…

This unknown entity

Full of recondite capacity…

 

Lies opaque

As ever intact,

At the bottom of the lake

It’s truth abstract…

 

But really,

Does honesty have a shade?

Portraying clearly

This childish masquerade

 

That seems to go on…

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Chris]

The "Womanfall" is exquisite... in words and ghostlets.

[Ana B.]

I'm glad you liked it.

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed your poetry today. Artwork and amazing words.
"Does honesty have a shade?
Portraying clearly
This childish masquerade"
You say so much with so little. I believe honesty is safer than living a lie. Thank you Ana for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much John for talking a walk down my thoughts :) Havr a wonderful evening.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Ana.

[closed]

wow, your vocabulary seems to be way above average

some of these words are new to me...



i really like how you implemented them in this work

awesome job

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much LAD :)

[Adam Adams]

Another one of my fav. writes! Seemed, it's a further part of your earlier write called "Temerity". Liked it. You've a very vivid imagery on it. Insights're so productive ov'r the concept. Every time I read your work find something new & glamours to think 'pon, but this time I gasped & felt like: Oh.. it's way beyond magnificence. Nicely pen'd up. I like how you take on .. on the subject & walk with anew genres you working across. You must carry on writing such "Compilations" for long, it's so good to read sudden spark through words in a different way. Wonderful work. Keep it up! ;)

[Ana B.]

I will try , thank you a lot dear Adams :)

[MadalaJose]

Wow! your poem is very rich in imagery. This is the second poem by you that i have read, and I like how your poems paint a picture of what you saying, and then you give a picture of what you were saying. I am inspired.

[Ana B.]

Thank you for your words Jose :)

[Dave]

Your imagery is stirring. I wish to see more of your work

[Ana B.]

Thank you Dave.

[Chris]

What is presented to us as 'who we are' is part of an endless "masquerade". I like whats going on here, it reminds me of Mother Kali.

[Ana B.]

:) thank you Chris

[:o]

Hidden lies are the bane of any relationship and should not be tolerated.

[Ana B.]

human nature shies away instinctively from honesty, sad, but true.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Seems as a picture to words feel and tone...with this write...starts with a rhyme scheme...yet as one goes about the read...tells more for you work the rhyme as if the words themselves are changing in the scene...as this plays well thru the entirety of theme...

[Ana B.]

Thank you for your words Glen.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

you're welcome...