Temerity

a WRATH compilation

Night and Day wrestle

Since before the time,

Holding up the vessel

And the celestial pantomime.

 

Are the Sun and Moon then

devout in their beliefs?

Terrified to condemn

themselves to the infernal sleeves…

 

How come mankind is not afraid

Of blasphemy and damnation,

Yet so eager to evade

The honesty’s intonation?

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Miss Sharon]

Wow! This is a well written and emotionally powerful write my friend. Bravo. ~Sharon

[Ana B.]

Thank you Miss Sharon!

[Coyote Poetry]

Men are the least wise of the animals.
"How come mankind is not afraid
Of blasphemy and damnation,
Yet so eager to evade
The honesty’s intonation?"
Men will kill, hate and destroy the land. No concern for the final payment. There will be one. A powerful poem. Left the reader with a lot to think about.
Coyote

[Ana B.]

The greater the power, the greater the weakness i suppose....no escaping those.....thank you John.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right and you are welcome.

[Adam Adams]

One of my fav. writes! It's written so carefully. Every thing even the tiny-miny one has deepen meaning to be understood... 'bout "Temerity". I'm pretty sure, I haven't read such a "Wrath" piece from you before. Seemed, you getting involved with writing/doing something new.. across anew genres. Sounds astounding! I'd like to see some more series of such "wrath compilations" if you're gonna have to work 'pon.. in forthcoming days. Excellent work... enjoyed reading it to the fullest! ;)

[Ana B.]

You are very generous Adams. Thank you very much :)

[Dave]

Another delightful piece of work. You stir the mind to think beyond the present.
Thank you for your artistry.

[Ana B.]

Thank you for your words Dave :)

[Robert]

You have the talent of the rhyme Ana, not all have this talent. well done and expressed.

[Ana B.]

Thanks Robert.

[SimpleMaidel]

Powerful words, and very talented, rich writing. I loved it.

[Ana B.]

Thank you SM :)