Depth

This shady world, with lines so blurry

Will end when the last word will be said.

When the last passage of this journey

Will be inevitably read.

 

And then, who will remember

The melting moon resting on the lake…

The maple rain that falls in September…

The flaming sun, always wide awake…

 

The crimson rose of a kiss

Brought by the dew as a gift…

Our breaths’ everlasting eclipse

In cardamom dreams slightly dipped…

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

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This is simply gorgeous poetry, Ana, and your selected images and song accompany the piece perfectly. The question you ask is one we all ponder: who will then witness the world in its splendour, from the melting moon and maple autumns to the beauty of the blazing sun... poetry will remember in the pages we write... the last two lines are my favorite as you compare the dipping of those cardamom dreams to the eclipsing of final breaths... stunning :D

[Ana B.]

:) Thank you for the amazing words my dear :)

[Deepak Belbase]

Very simple words but meaning was so deep, i enjoy the every single word...

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much :)

[Adam Adams]

Quite melodious!

"The crimson rose of a kiss
Brought by the dew as a gift... "

Liked the choice of words. Enjoyed reading it!

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Adams!

[Saddam]

It's like a flower, when it raise and when it fell, both make us pleasant.
Beautiful creation dear friend.
Just fell in its depth.

[Ana B.]

Thank you my dear :)

[sereenaoutloud]

The opening line is shut superb

This Shady world with lines so blurry

Just love that as the world is not just back and white it's is full for grey!!

[Ana B.]

:) Thanks girlie !

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the last said, the last read...and then, just nature to look upon a planet empty of humans...and poetry left unwritten...and more poetry not read...left untouched forever...no one left to remember.

hauntingly beautiful...

[Ana B.]

Nothing is eternal.....well, perhaps only the memories...they always float in the space...thank you very much Jacob.