Depth

This shady world, with lines so blurry

Will end when the last word will be said.

When the last passage of this journey

Will be inevitably read.

 

And then, who will remember

The melting moon resting on the lake…

The maple rain that falls in September…

The flaming sun, always wide awake…

 

The crimson rose of a kiss

Brought by the dew as a gift…

Our breaths’ everlasting eclipse

In cardamom dreams slightly dipped…

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[E G TEN]

Hello Miss Ana, Your writing is on a different level now,
But I'm glad That you hanged on to your own style and
Character, , I can still see that nature loving, goodwill
ambassador poetic justice writer,, this poem flows perfectly
With intense and colorful words that makes this a soothing
read about depth, well done! :-) love the picture as well :-)
Thanks!

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much for the wonderful words EG :)

[R Smith]

And then, who will remember
The melting moon resting on the lake…
The maple rain that falls in September…
The flaming sun, always wide awake…

a most scintillating poem, sheer delight Ana :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you dear Richard :D

[AaronFreitas]

I love the way you worded this entire poem... there is so much beauty in it! "This shady world, with lines so blurry Will end when the last word will be said." I love those first two lines and the impact it has on the read... another great write Ana :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much dear Aaron :)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Superb writing M'am.... as usual a brilliant write

[Ana B.]

Thank you Anurag :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Deep and powerful thoughts.
"And then, who will remember
The melting moon resting on the lake…
The maple rain that falls in September…
The flaming sun, always wide awake…"
Thoughts and memories make us who we are. The poem left the reader with something to think about. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ana B.]

Indeed they do my friend....otherwise personalities would simply not exist. Thank you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Ana.

[armin]

Just beautiful Ana,
superb writing.
Now whatelse I can say is, you are a talented writer.
Every word had it's own depth and beauty.
Thanks for the RR.

armin. ...

[Ana B.]

Thank you dear Armin :)

[MsJewel]

The images you have created are lovely in this melancholy little gem. The picture you chose is almost as beautiful as your poetry. Wonderful writing my dear friend.

:) Julie

[Ana B.]

Thank you my sweet friend :)

[Emily]

Great wording!
That picture is so beautiful!
Well done!

[Ana B.]

Thank you Emily :)

[Simon Welsh]

Now that's a poem! FYI, Daniela Andrade did a fantastic cover of La Vie En Rose.

[Ana B.]

Thank you Elliot :) Yes, i know , very lovely :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

I enjoyed your read full of beauty and colors at last in the picture. Wonderfully crafted!

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome