Between the blinks

Between the blinks

A Poem by Ana B.

The moon is playing

Ultimatums with the brain…

 Smoking and portraying

Her cinder clouds again…


I lay smiling

On the tapestry of the blueberry forests…

Softest clouds rhyming

With the sky’s best florists


So that eyes could witness

This world’s daily rebirth…

With incredible stillness

A new life is served…

 








© 2015 Ana B.


Author's Note

Ana B.
Incredible artwork by the 16 year photographer David Uzochukwu


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Very apt selection of words. Not a word more, not a word less. Just perfect. Best line that i liked " Sky's best florist".
Fantastic photographs to accompany this master-piece poem.

The thoracic vertebrae and the scapula are so visible in the photo, it is sheer beauty.
A classic symphony of the PEN and CAMERA.
Great going, keep it up.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana B.

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much B, you are very kind :)



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A fine poem and stunning art.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ana B.

9 Years Ago

Thank you Cherry :)
beautiful words for beautiful photographs... brilliant combination!! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ana B.

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much girl!
So very lovely what a painter of words not my skill set a master

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ana B.

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)
The art work is fantastic, but these words don't lack any luster either:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ana B.

9 Years Ago

Thank you dear James :)
your poetry is so pure and delightful, its like you dropped out of heaven to entertain us lesser mortals, I love your every word :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ana B.

9 Years Ago

oh my , my good friend, you always find what to say....i'm humbled by your praise, i am forever grat.. read more
the way you use nature to portray feelings...and your use of the near rhyme...emily d. would find a kindred spirit/poet in you.
beautiful piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ana B.

9 Years Ago

oh wow, thank you for saying so dear Jacob.

Lyrical journey...moonscape painted with a truly delicate hand. And the blueberries...nice touch.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ana B.

9 Years Ago

:) thank you Siegried, you are very gracious.
Very apt selection of words. Not a word more, not a word less. Just perfect. Best line that i liked " Sky's best florist".
Fantastic photographs to accompany this master-piece poem.

The thoracic vertebrae and the scapula are so visible in the photo, it is sheer beauty.
A classic symphony of the PEN and CAMERA.
Great going, keep it up.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana B.

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much B, you are very kind :)
Beautiful words and amazing photos. Each photos told a complete story. Thank you dear Ana for sharing your words and the photos.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ana B.

9 Years Ago

Thank you dear John, the photos are my inspiration this time :)
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

I use the photos. Give me positive reasons to write and you are welcome.

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