Glass

Sometimes all I do is look at life through the glass…

Never participating…

Always letting the days to just pass

Never anticipating…

The next dawn…

                               The next moonrise…

Breaking the law

And the beauty of a surprise…

 

Lost in wilderness

Seductively drown in innocence…

A silent witness…

A sea of indifference…

 

Set the world on fire…

Witness the journey of a drop…

Carefully destroy this empire

That our minds always tend to adopt…

 

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

I've noticed that sometimes you rhyme & sometimes you don't but when you don't do, there's even still a figment of rhyme which's very bountiful to read or to see in your stuffs. Every time you come up with something new .. kinda coming with new things in words like...

"Lost in wilderness
Seductively drown in innocence…"

One of my fav. lines here.

I composed the below words as I was just... typing you this review... Sudden Moment...

"Lost in the shadow of dark
Surprisingly keen to find some truth
Empire-heart lit the spark...
.. to the wilderness-glasses of virtue."

Great Job!

[Ana B.]

A fantastic response dear Adam :) Thank you very much!

[Adam Adams]

Just.. heading on.. toward your another poetry.