Waltz of feathers

Come lie down

On my planet of feathers

In my perfect town

Of lavender pleasures…

 

Where my heart eats only raspberry wishes

Planted on the gold whispered fields

Served in ebony dishes

That have walked the augury hills…

 

There, at the top of the tallest tree

The Masters harvest the recipe of love…

A magic blend of the alchemy’s tea

And some dust from the stars above…

 

Some drinkers of this concoction die

Others dance…

Others aren’t willing to try

And give it a chance…

 

So what can a lone heart do

When souls walk in tribes…

Searching for a shinny proof

In a city with no lights?

 

And if you don’t have the answer

Knock on my planet’s gate -

My unintentional, feathery dancer

For the wind of  fate.

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[KWP]

life in all its forms ... tempting indeed ... very well done X

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much :D

[anne]

for me this is the best..A magic blend of the alchemy’s tea..haha..you are always wonderful ans so are you here..:))

[Ana B.]

oh thank you very much my dear :)

[Sari Segale]

"Planet of feathers",love this ,a place to love ,sweet hope,dance,give it a chance,loneniness,searching for the light, magical, love it.

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Sari :)

[ANTO]

This is a place I'd be happy to revisit again and again. Beautifully surreal and yet familiar in a societal respect.
A class title too. Well penned dear poet. :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much dear reader :)

[ANTO]

my pleasure Ana ;)

[ANTO]

my dear friend ;)

[Jordan]

Sounds like a frightening place. It almost feels like a coverup of something darker. Like a person has constructed a beautiful world around them in an attempt to forget about everything falling apart either around them or inside of them. OR...maybe I have a problem with seeing happy endings in things. :D

[Ana B.]

I think it's the later :) sometimes, we need fantastic ''metaphors'' to describe the world we're living in, not because it's bad, but because we see it that way.....in any case, thank you very much Kaiju :)

[Jordan]

I don't ALWAYS see the bad in things. I just have a tendency to feel happiness in poetry is saccharine. I blame it on my sometimes cynical personality. But hey, it's a good poem no matter what.

[Ana B.]

of course, no matter what you have an unique point of view, and i'm glad it was pointed in the direction of my writes :) Thank you

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!
tapping my feet already........such a magical place to be.........perfect place to be.......
seems like i have been knocking on wrong doors........read me the address again.......... lol
beautiful......magical......
i loved it!!!
:)

[Ana B.]

Thank you very very much dear Pushkar :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

always a pleasure Ana!!! :) :)

[Adam Adams]

The words that you do use "Planet of feathers" be one of the very beautiful & fantastic words which display your emotions. Very beautiful words you've come up with. Amazing usage of sentences! Historically, you've treasured the philosophical thoughts of love by coming along with such a wondrous poetry.

Many fav. lines're out there like "wind of fate"; "lavender pleasures"; "city with no lights"; "alchemy's tea" & few more. Honestly, I just enjoyed reading it to the full!

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much for stopping by in my little world Nina :)

[Adam Adams]

I guess, I be Adam (s). Nina be you. Lol

[Ana B.]

lol, okay :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Your lines really took me into different world. It was really nice!

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Skyfall :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome Ana

[marcus]

I would dance!! What a beautiful vision!!

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much!

[jb]

I love it! Very romantic :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Jessica!

[jb]

Your welcome:)