Mortality

a M.A.G.I.C. compilation

Hello world, please hold me for a while

Until the Lord of Chaos has struck

Making it arduous to reconcile

Those conflictive emotions, ready to erupt

 

Sitting in the Temple of Remembrance

In this frozen moment…

Oh, this life’s unmistakable fragrance

Replenishing the Ancient Cities of Peace…and of Torment…

 

Life and Death have no supremacy.

They only tell a story…

Of those things that are always meant to be

Carrying through time humanity’s glory…

Reviews

[Isabel]

I particularly loved the opening line. Really great work!

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Maria :)

[Emily]

Nice wording!
Well done!!

[Ana B.]

Thank you Emily!

[Passengerr]

'sitting in the temple of remembrance'- love those words.. Clever depiction of how ephemeral life can be..:-)

[Ana B.]

indeed....thank you for the insight Richie.

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
Deep piece that had me thinking for sure,
your poetry always gets my ticker ticking, so
for that thanks:) Wording and message solid
and amazing! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Ana B.]

Thank you for reading my friend :)

[B]

This poem has so much grace to it
Love the closing line

[Ana B.]

Thank you Nisreena, you're very sweet!