Dynasty

a wee dramatic old scribble

Between the clouds maker

And the master of shadows

The army of sky breakers

Release their night-dipped arrows

 

So that in the forgotten realms

Some light will shine

And the daughters of wars

Some corners of peace could find

 

Some sketches of hope…

A balm for their shadow kissed soul

The magic that a fantasy can evoke

To erase all that the darkness stole

 

No legions of faith and armies of moonlight

Can do it for us…

Cause only we can find the hidden delight

And the edges of this eternal contrast…

 

Through Devil’s eyes

Our soul is corrupt with stealth,

But no matter how hard we try

The truth unravels by itself.

Author's Note

Reviews

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Clouds, shadows, night...again you took these words and made them look more beautiful through this poem....Hats off M'am for your writings... sheer brilliances

[Ana B.]

thank you very much Anurag :)

[Lyndy]

I love this poem! It's very inspiring and I do agree that it's only us that can find the hidden delight in our lives! ^^

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much dear Lyndy :)

[Confuser]

Ana: Gorgeous artwork and writing. I suppose we can all be corrupted by the ever changing temptations of the mortal world. Your metaphors are beautiful and I see this as mixed fantasty and "real life" disappointments we all feel. It's sad and I wish we could find that peace around the edges; somewhere in the world; maybe if we were a little closer, or had the courage to really see what is in each other's hearts. Like you penned so well: No matter what happens the truth unravels by itself. Lovely, as always dear Ana. Thank you again....Dale

[Ana B.]

Thank you for the most amazing words Dale. Take care :)

[Confuser]

You're welcome Ana!

[Abilash Uttama]

so true.. truth unfolds on its own. nice poem as always Ma'am :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much!

[usman]

i really like it.The idea is very exceptional

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!
fantasy filled stunning poem......
magical write.....
truth really unfolds on its own......
i loved it!!!
:)

[Ana B.]

Thank you Pushkar :)

[Blotted Ink Productions]

Great job Ana...extremely vivid!

[Ana B.]

Spasiba Ruslan ( i hope i got it right :))

[Blotted Ink Productions]

You did! Great job

[Daisy]

beautiful poem..... great writing ana.....

[Ana B.]

Thank you Daisy :)

[R Smith]

those devil's eyes would have us believe we are the body but one day the truth will come from within, its all inside us :)

[Ana B.]

i take it you liked my poem then? :)

[R Smith]

Of course, its your best ever, the first stanza is a dream write anyone would be proud of, the whole as a finding of our true selves, escaping from darkness and war in a world under satanic rule, to realize the light within is a war we can win and happen even in the face of great resistence, simply stunning work Ana :)

[R Smith]

I think i wrote the first review under the influence of bewilderment at being blocked, really can't see what i did wrong, ah well! Never mind :)

[Ana B.]

lol, my friend i was kidding of course, i'm super thrilled you enjoyed but even more glad that you've read it, even if you wouldn't leave any review i'd still be very glad :) Thank you!

[R Smith]

you're welcome Ana, I doubt i'd miss reviewing you :) I just let things bother me sometimes and being blocked has been bugging me, mainly because i cannot remember giving offence to anyone indeed I always try to be a good guy which makes it kinda confusing, strange huh :)

[Ana B.]

seriously, you've been blocked? It doesn't make any sense...and don't let it bug you my friend....i've also closed my accound here for a while but then i decided i won't let anyone intimidate me....just remember that you have good friends here ready to support ;)

[R Smith]

Thank you Ana, much appreciated :)

[Ana B.]

:) Take care my friend

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

This poem could be put on the first pages of a fantasy novel. Very good, I like the theme and I like the words. Very well done, Anne. :) Rudi

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Rudi :)