La belle dame

ruffling old pages.....

 

A black beauty is dancing

Amongst the cobalt tears…

Those tears demanding

Her affections so fierce…

 

Her wishes of quartz…

And dreams of aquamarine

Brighter than the stars

With their light pristine…

 

In her palace of moonshine

The beauty stays untouched

Because it’s hard to define

What have those tears washed…

 

Is it the light of the laughing stars?

Or the ashes of a dream…

Or maybe the invisible scars

Of a heartbreaking wince…

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Very beautiful poem, Ana. It rhymes, it flows like a river in springtime. I love the words and the sounds. Very good. :) Rudi

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much dear Rudi :)

[Robert]

A very lovely piece Ana. I also like the way you place a picture in your poems.

[Ana B.]

I'm glad you do, thank you Robert.

[613]

The picture, along with the font of the piece was chosen well. It truly represented the poem's words, which were written exquisitely. Well done.

- Brittney

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Brittney :)

[613]

You're welcome!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!
Brilliant!!!
decorated in gems!!!
another masterful profound write......
i loved it!!!
:)

[Ana B.]

Thank you Pushkar :)

[@juliza]

Good write! I like the flow of the words from phrase to phrase. Nice job!

[Ana B.]

Thank you Juliza :)

[Terrence Chang]

The beauty lady without mercy I like the tittle it is super cool.

[Ana B.]

Thank you a lot Terrence :)

[~EO]

This piece is very well done, i am in love with not only your word choice but the picture that your choice of words paints. Beautiful

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much for the beautiful words :)

[AaronFreitas]

This is another beautiful piece Ana.... picture fits perfect with the write.
Good work I enjoyed this poem :)

[Ana B.]

I'm glad you enjoyed Aaron, thank you :)

[R Smith]

another diamond in your casket of jewels Ana, no wonder the stars are laughing they are living the delight of being part of your poem :)

[Ana B.]

:) Thank you my sweetest friend for the amazing words :) May the stars smile down at us every day.

[B]

Lovely

A beauty dancing in the dark midnight hours

Gorgeous

[Ana B.]

Thank youvery much!