Tangled

Sharing the satin nights

Floating in the atlas air

From the silken sighs

To the jaconet stare…

 

A waltz of breaths

 On the frozen windows

Where moonlight rests

Next to our heads on the pillows

 

Next to cashmere embraces

And panné kisses

Those velvet caresses

Enslaving the sweetest wishes

 

Take a walk where the stars write

All that is going to be…

And if I lose myself tonight

Don’t ever stop finding me…

 

 

Reviews

[KWP]

wow - what a magical write - it is very easy to sink into the depths of your words - kinda float there for a while and knowing that everything is going to be just right no matter what - yep - fantastic X

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much dear KWP :D

[KWP]

loved it X

[R Smith]

just incredible Ana, I almost don't have the words to describe how i feel about this poem,

A waltz of breaths
On the frozen windows

I could live that forever its so good and the last stanza? Sheer Perfection, I hope I don't stop finding you.....on here :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much my friend, i'm beyond thrilled you liked it!

[Destiny Dreamer]

amazing write. When I first saw the TITLE I couldn't wait to read it. You know "Tangled" is my Favorite Movie. I love Rapunzel. Beside, Your Poem it is AWESOME. Enjoyed reading it. "If I lose myself tonight, don't ever stop finding me" WOW! Love it!

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much, i'm a big fan of fairy tales...eh, especially the happy endings... :D

[Destiny Dreamer]

YUP!

[Destiny Dreamer]

Me too

[Destiny Dreamer]

OMG! Awesome

[Ana B.]

Thanks sweetie :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

OMG! Awesome

[Destiny Dreamer]

You are WELCOME