Tangled

Sharing the satin nights

Floating in the atlas air

From the silken sighs

To the jaconet stare…

 

A waltz of breaths

 On the frozen windows

Where moonlight rests

Next to our heads on the pillows

 

Next to cashmere embraces

And panné kisses

Those velvet caresses

Enslaving the sweetest wishes

 

Take a walk where the stars write

All that is going to be…

And if I lose myself tonight

Don’t ever stop finding me…

 

 

Reviews

[stansg]

Great work Ana, a lot of fabric has gone into your work ;) Jokes apart, this is a very good piece; romantic, sensual, beautiful.
Loved it.

[Ana B.]

ha ha, thank you very much for stopping by :)

[MsJewel]

I love romantic poetry and this is exquisite. Satin nights where moonlights rests, enslaving the sweetest wishes....
Stunning, stunning poetry Ana

:) Julie

[Ana B.]

Thank you dear Julie :)

[Jamestown]

This is another amazing piece of poetry!
I can't pick a favorite stanza, they are all fantastic,
Thanks for sharing your imagery filled write and b-blessed!

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much James :)

[AaronFreitas]

"Take a walk where the stars write
All that is going to be…
And if I lose myself tonight
Don’t ever stop finding me…"

I love that final stanza my friend... beautiful :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you Aaron :)

[AaronFreitas]

You are welcome beautiful ;)

[Isabel25]

"Cashmere embraces" "the atlas air"- such amazing adjectives Ana.....And the title- it suit this poem so well; how the lovers get tangled amidst the desires and touches and kisses and smells......Its beautiful :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Annie :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem for love.
"Take a walk where the stars write
All that is going to be…
And if I lose myself tonight
Don’t ever stop finding me"
The above lines could stand alone. Good to be found and know joy. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ana B.]

Thank you greatly my dear friend :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Ana.

[Adam Adams]

"A waltz of breath... On the frozen windows... " Sensuality of love & the shadow of spirit both're nicely divined in... such lines. Liked the strawberry flavor of your art. Something new and sensual I've read this very day. I won't be agree with your words anymore that you'd said to me earlier before.. bout your writing ,.. like most of your stuffs're dark... The latest work's very romantic & thought invoking. The words: "Waltz of breath" .. are very deep. It makes an imagery of love, across the page, made up under the bliss of one roof where the silence of room meets the temper of flattered breaths of loved-spirits. Excellent Work!

[Ana B.]

I'm very thrilled you could enjoy this piece Adams :) And yes, maybe at some point from now, i've come to notice that too.....not so dark after all :) Thank you!

[Adam Adams]

You're welcome. Glad to know, now you're stepping up & leaving past behind. It's very hard to forget everything, but not impossible. Writing sensual or happiest or peaceful or romantic or may be, light hearted pieces.. could be the new way to you to look beyond the region. Keep writing. I'll be around your page.

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much for those inspiring words :)

[Maumil Mehraj]

"And if I lose myself tonight
Don’t ever stop finding me…" I love this line! The poem is so melodious and effortlessly beautiful. Many thanks for sharing!
Great work!
~Maumil

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much for reading :)

[B]

I loveeeeeee the last line

Oh my

So romantic

I totally love it

please write more

You are real good

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Nisreenaa, you're very sweet :)

[sereenaoutloud]

Oh yes to be tangled where your limbs get all confused...love this piece Ana!! :)

[Ana B.]

:) I'm glad you do, thanks Sereena