Tangled

Sharing the satin nights

Floating in the atlas air

From the silken sighs

To the jaconet stare…

 

A waltz of breaths

 On the frozen windows

Where moonlight rests

Next to our heads on the pillows

 

Next to cashmere embraces

And panné kisses

Those velvet caresses

Enslaving the sweetest wishes

 

Take a walk where the stars write

All that is going to be…

And if I lose myself tonight

Don’t ever stop finding me…

 

 

Reviews

[CA Anurag Sharma]

No words left to praise your writings... I am sorry that I missed reading it earlier but loss is all mine....incredible really.....

[Ana B.]

:) you are very kind, thank you!

[anne]

you are a beauty in words..always love, warmth flow in them..beautiful dear...:))

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much my dear :))

[Emily]

Just great wording!
Well done!
Keep it up!

[Ana B.]

Thank you Emily :)

[Carrie.]

This one is really good. Everything is on point, rhyme and reason.

[Ana B.]

Thank you Carrie.

[Saddam]

And if I lose myself tonight
Don’t ever stop finding me…

Its wonderful and nice write, so warmth and beautiful.

[Ana B.]

Thank you greatly my dear.

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Wow, great love poem, love the last stanza, very well done, Ana. :) Rudi

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Rudi :)

[W R Stowe]

We often do become slave to love and romance into the night

[Ana B.]

Indeed we do, thank you for stopping by :)

[W R Stowe]

your welcome

[jacob erin-cilberto]

that is a long and happy walk if we just let ourselves feel enough to take it.

[Ana B.]

Thank you Jacob.

[Mirab Irfan]

This a beautiful piece of work Ana.Great job!

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Mirab :)

[Blotted Ink Productions]

I'm guessing you only sleep in the best...1000 threw count or higher! LOL! Nice writing

[Ana B.]

lol, you're right on that account, thanks Ruslan :)