The ''shoulds''

Live…

         Breathe…

                        Believe…

That this love on a cloud is real

And there are no hopes to steal…

No secrets to reveal

No fighting this appeal…

 

Loud like the all time silence

And silent like the all time noise

Fly like a bird without guidance

And sing like a voiceless voice…

For all that a youth can give

And all that the life can take

All the deeds that we forgive

Done by a reckless mistake…

 

So if there is a someone to share

That wispy cloud with

What use is there to care

If the sky is up, or underneath?

 

 

 

Reviews

[Terrence Chang]

Live…Breathe…Believe… What an exotic write Ana. The three words blew me away

[Ana B.]

:) Thank you my dear!

[~]

I like how you have juxtaposed the modality verbs with the true selfless love that the speaker wants and wishes to reside in the heart of the lover.
lovely!

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much my friend! :)

[sereenaoutloud]

So romantic and yes i believe we all should give more than we should ever take !!
great write!

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Sereena :)

[Adam Adams]

Very romantic poetry you portray in few words. I do agree with your poetry, we all "should" believe in "give" and "take" because, even the life's 'bout "giving" and "taking", but unfortunately, when two people're in love of each other, they only care of .. for... 'taking' instead of 'giving'. Their heart make 'em doing so. Furthermore, If they start caring only for 'giving' more than 'taking', their heart'll never find the way to escape the wounds / heartaches and the pain of love-life. So, yes, to escape the wounds given by 'love', people always put their feet into "love". Love's seemed like a contradictory to hearts which "gives" & "takes" everything even the life. Enjoyed reading your poetry. You always bring very deep imagery to people / writers.. to let 'em know / see / watch and read the depth of love through poetic words. I believe, to know the value of love, one must understand the cost of words. Beautiful write. Well done!

[Ana B.]

Yes, i agree with you completely dear Adams, the cost of words is hard to determine....even if we choose it as a weapon or as a endearing...Thank you very much, you are very kind to me :) Take care.

[R Smith]

Magnificent!! I think you know now what's coming when I review you, I do not believe that you can ever let me down, this poem is perfect, the last stanza takes me away to heaven to find and share the love that needs no reason it just is, the first stanza sets us up for that final trip, the second the journey there and the third is the shedding of worries and mistakes before landing on the fourth level and becoming one with love and peace, marvelous Ana :)

[Ana B.]

Perhaps you're right, but it doesn't stop me from loving your reviews dear Richard, thanks you very very very much :D

[Blotted Ink Productions]

"Loud like the all time silence, and silent like the all time noise"

That's hot! Awesome!

[Ana B.]

Many thanks Ruslan :)

[Chris]

Unique, thought-full, and accepting...

[Ana B.]

Thank you dear :)

[Jamestown]

Another fantastic piece, last stanza in this one speaks volumes to
me! I love the format and choice wording, thanks for sharing and
b-blessed!

[Ana B.]

Thank you for reading my friend :)

[Jamestown]

My pleasure, love your work:)
Hope you have a fantastic day...

[Ana B.]

Thank you my dear, hope you have the same!