Cosmic

Am I a particle in the Universe?

Cause we all are universes for those particles…

Am I the Black Hole, trying to reverse

The flow of light, that’s cradling all the surfaces…

 

Am I a meteor, hitting a planet?

Cause my words sure land in someone’s heart…

Even if that heart is made of granite

Nothing can stop it….once it falls apart…

 

Am I a satellite, that is overgrown

And disputing with the laws of gravity…

Speculating sins and then trying to atone

The left stains on the cloth of chastity…

 

Am I the light waiting to grow

Into a space less sphere …

Like all those stars that wish to know

That life round here…

 

Am I the Space’s dust

Carrying the secrets of the time…

…the time that decided to trust

Those particles, which don’t know how to shine…

 

 

Reviews

[ANTO]

The narrator is all these things and none of them at the same time - universally and quantum-ly speaking
(just don't ask me what that means, Cosmic Girl)

The whole poem is cosmic - the final stanza is the ignition of a star. The particles will shine - in some space and in some time methinks.
A heady poem which I should not have made my first stop after lunch.
Great write Ana.
:)

[Ana B.]

Lol, probably not .... thank you for the beautiful vosmic refferences...i love all related to it...its a forever combination wih philosophy for me...

[Ana B.]

Oops...cosmic i meant

[ANTO]

You'll like this image that google offered when I was looking for the Cosmic Girl Video then. PS you may not want to come back out of this one...
https://i2.wp.com/ih.constantcontact.com/fs150/1101347297433/img/406.jpg

[Destiny Dreamer]

OMG! Amazing ... Really I love it. "Am I a meteor, hitting a planet ... 'Cause my words sure land in someone's heart" How beautifully You have compared everything. Hats off to YOU my Ideal :) :-*

[Ana B.]

:D Thank you very much Dreamer ( love the nickname btw)

[Destiny Dreamer]

No need to say ThankYou.. Your work is worth a praise :) :) :) You will Like my Real name ever more ;) lOl :D ThankYou I picked it Cause I have 7 Dreams to chance.. I am Day Dreamer :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

even* Opps mistake :D

[Ana B.]

hmmm.....well in this case hope you'll catch all 7 of them :D

[Destiny Dreamer]

Thanks :) :) :)