Cosmic

Am I a particle in the Universe?

Cause we all are universes for those particles…

Am I the Black Hole, trying to reverse

The flow of light, that’s cradling all the surfaces…

 

Am I a meteor, hitting a planet?

Cause my words sure land in someone’s heart…

Even if that heart is made of granite

Nothing can stop it….once it falls apart…

 

Am I a satellite, that is overgrown

And disputing with the laws of gravity…

Speculating sins and then trying to atone

The left stains on the cloth of chastity…

 

Am I the light waiting to grow

Into a space less sphere …

Like all those stars that wish to know

That life round here…

 

Am I the Space’s dust

Carrying the secrets of the time…

…the time that decided to trust

Those particles, which don’t know how to shine…

 

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I don't know the answer but I have known people who could set the world on fire. I believe we can be the quiet people or the people that try to make a different. A powerful poem. Made me think this late night. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry dear Ana.
Coyote

[Ana B.]

:) Thank you my friend, even if here is a gloomy morning....still pondering those questions...

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Ana.

[Emily]

Lovely wording!
Keep it up!

[Ana B.]

Will do, thanks!

[Chris]

Such real rhetorical questions you ask...

[Ana B.]

Don't we all know the answers?

[Chris]

Only to the easy ones... the others we mull over.

[Ana B.]

All that I've come to learn in this short life of mine is that the more complicated the question, the simpler the answer, and backwards; that you can never make everyone happy and that there are no limits to the powers of the mind....

[Adam Adams]

You're not a star;
can never be the light;
you're no cosmic ray;
(yes, you're night)
you'll never be granite ..
Perhaps, I wonder,
If the whole universe already invades with you;
lives within you;
breaths the air in you;
smells the scents of yous to you,
How could you be a star.. even...
if the whole Satellite belongs to you?
I don't mean, but yes, a poet meant you!

I don't know, why I wrote this here for you, but as of this very moment, what all I can say's, yes, I wrote what your beautiful poetry makes me to...
Beautiful imagery. Thanks for sharing this write with me on my demand or else i'd have probably missed your deepen words to read.

Bless you.

[Ana B.]

oh my, what beauty have i found here :) There are no words to express my gratitue and appreciation, thank you very much dear Adams (from Adam?) for brightening up this gloomy day that's settled here.
Bless you as well.

[Adam Adams]

Whatever your muse calls me "Adams" or "Adam", i'll always appreciate your kindness. I'm glad you enjoyed the words (I wrote for you), but the fact's, your poetry's the foremost reason that hustled me to write away. Thanks for admiring my words with such a great gratitude of heart. You've been always kind to me.

[Ana B.]

Yes, i did enjoy these beautiful words, there is no kindness, just hinesty, because your work is worth it, i'm quickly becoming a fan :)
Take care Adam(s).

[Ana B.]

* * * honesty

[R Smith]

the answer is very simple Ana, you are a star! The light of this Cafe' more incredible writing, lend me your pen please :)

[Ana B.]

:) lol, if that's gonna get me such compliments, yes please !

[R Smith]

express post please lol, although i guess its just a pen without your words, lovely writing as always :)

[Sami Khalil]

This is wonderful. I enjoyed the cosmic thoughts and journey. Excellent...:).....

[Ana B.]

Thank you for stopping by Sami :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)........

[Sumana Roy]

what an amazing exploration in space!! the second stanza is exquisite.

[Ana B.]

Thank you a lot!

[Tom]

From the stars we are born and to the stars we shall return ! Mankind has pondered since the dawn of civilization how & why he came to be ?

A wonderfully captivating and engrossing piece of outer-worldly wise poetry !

[Ana B.]

humans indeed tend towards cosmogonic concepts....thank you very much Tom :)

[Tom]

They sure do Ana & you're most welcome !

[Daisy]

awesome ana...... it's very nice poem you have wrote.....
I think am a star... shining to be a guiding light for others.... maybe :)

[Ana B.]

What a beautiful thought Daisy! Thank you :)

[Confuser]

Ana: You are simply amazing GIRL! So inspiring and talented. When I read these questions, I am blown away, and you do touch hearts with your suttle but eloquently written words. I feel so happy when I read your poems. You give such a vivid display and it always comes down to the heart, and love. Another mind-blowing piece of art. Every line is amazing: Those particles, which don't know how to shine. I can relate. Thank you so very much. Outstanding once again. Dale

[Ana B.]

And you are an amazing and so givig. Thank you very much dear Dale for bringing me happiness through these lines. :)

[Confuser]

Y/W Ana...all true. But THANK YOU again. So talented!