Night pacts

I made a deal with the Stars

So that they would take over my dreams.

These dreams that we have are ours…

Yet the universe is wishing with us - by all means…

 

I made a deal with the Moon

So that she would watch over my slumber

Cause all of my efforts in trying to attune

To you succeed when my worries are younger

 

I made a deal with the dark sky

So I could always see the stars

And so I could never misapply

The dark heart of a storm to the soft sunrise…

 

Reviews

[Shubham Joshi]

This is an outstanding poem.

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much :)

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

I think you've made a good deal. Nice poem. :) Rudi

[Ana B.]

Hopefully so. Thank you :)

[Lyndy]

Oh, this poem is very mesmerising! I really like it. :D

[Ana B.]

Thank you Lyndy :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the flow of the thoughts giving life and purpose to the photo. I like the the repetition used create thoughts and possibilities. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much my friend :D

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Ana.

[Jamestown]

Another fantastic piece, the creativity and thought behind this piece is really cool!
Making a deal with the sky and it's occupants is unique for sure:)
Well written and delivered, great imagery!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much dear James.

[sharonlee]

Such wisdom... for the Universe does indeed watch over us and wish with us in our dreams. Beautifully woven.

[Ana B.]

I really hope that's true......thank you Sharon :)

[Misery]

The line: "When My Worries Are Younger", is marvelous.
I find much inspiration in the way you phrased that. Well done, dear poet.

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much :)

[William Nassar]

I adore such deals ...
Very romantic, passionate and deep.

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Dr :)

[AaronFreitas]

Damn I love the way you are so descriptive with your writing and it always comes out beautiful! Another great poem Ana :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you my sweet friend :)

[Isabel25]

"Yet the universe is wishing with us by all means"...I wish that we can make such deals with the stars, moon and the sky. I love your concept Ana, letting nature take care of you and your love. Such beautiful imageries and soothing lines.

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much dear Annie for the sweet words :)

[Isabel25]

You are welcome Ana :)