Measureless

A life in prose... in a world of rhymes…

A golden ingot …in a satchel of dimes…

I had fallen for the right illusion

Cause for my insanity, reality’s the intrusion…

 

Leaving for the great wide open planes

For the secret meaning this life obtains…

Into the wind, hope is a passive activity

Embroidering all the patterns of the relativity…

 

My heart starts to wonder once in a while

If it’s legal to be as doubtful as docile…

Cause once accepting our limits, we go beyond them

That passive activity becoming our silent anthem…

 

A guilty heart is silent.

A joyful one has tones to say…

A pacified heart is smiling

At the meteors that come our way…

 

Reviews

[CA Anurag Sharma]

A guilty heart is silent.
A joyful one has tones to say…
A pacified heart is smiling
At the meteors that come our way…

Such lovely words...beautiful....

[Ana B.]

thank you very much for stopping by :)

[Lyndy]

Another beautiful poem! I really love the feeling it gives me. :D

[Ana B.]

:) Thank you !

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words true.
"A guilty heart is silent.
A joyful one has tones to say…
A pacified heart is smiling
At the meteors that come our way…"
Life make us know joy, pain and chance. A good life is leaving feeling of kindness in their path of life. Thank you dear Ana for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ana B.]

Thank you dear John for the sweet review :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!
captivating.......beautiful write......
we need a touch of insanity.........like burning a candle in the storm........and betting on the odds of flame against the storm....
confinement can grow bonsai and not mighty trees.....

brilliant writing....
i loved it!!!
:)

[Ana B.]

true words. Thank you Pushkar :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome!!!! :) :)

[Terrence Chang]

Great write Ana. It has captivated my mind. Truly a magnificent art

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Terrence :)

[Terrence Chang]

you'r welcome

[sereenaoutloud]

love this, so very true our own mind creates the limit once we let that go we can fly beyond them!
great write!

[Ana B.]

thank you Sereena :)

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Great write, Ana B. Love it, accepting limits to go beyond them...very good. :) Rudi

[Ana B.]

Thank you for the sweet words Rudi :)

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

My pleasure, Ana. :)

[nazia]

This is what a truly passionate heart wants. Not to be confined or bound. This work is truly measureless
Ana :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you sweet Nazia :)

[armin]

A life in prose... in a world of rhymes…
An attractive opening those words caught my eyes, rhyming portion is fine.
The ending stands the best.
All over a good one miss Ana B.

armin. ...

[Ana B.]

Thank you a lot dear Armin :)

[Saddam]

The whole idea is fantastic.
Great read as always.
Totally enjoyable piece.

[Ana B.]

Thank you my dear :)