Chocolate

I tasted the decadence…left me reeling

The soft fingertips on my lips

I tasted the idleness…it had no meaning

Yet I had more than my share of sips…

 

The passion…sweet rose with thorns

Compendious, unforgettable taste…

With a distinctive frosting that adorns

The sleepless nights we spend in no haste…

 

The placid lullaby, nectarous as ever

Pouring my heart with fondness…

Making me float in the forever

You painted in this infinite darkness

 

The honey taste of the cozy embraces

Sweetening my hours till dawn…

Don’t need any sounds, any words or phrases

Just on my heart, the soft heaviness of your palm

 

I tasted futility…its acrid aroma…

Nothing like our ballads of goodnight

Candy coated dreams that are always gonna

Haunt my awareness till the moment we reunite…

Reviews

[phoenix]

the piece is bitter and sweet at a time just like the choice of your chocolate.... really enjoyed it!! :D

[Ana B.]

:) thank you very much!

[sinNsincerity]

A scrumptious read that left my mouth watery.
What's your favorite Chocolate to eat if you don't mind me asking?

[Ana B.]

Thank you, my favorite is the dark, 70% or even more bitter chocolate :)

[Brian Kraklau]

wow.... this was so well written. i enjoyed every word of this. almost teasing in a way. beautifully done and full of passion. i love it. i look forward to more...

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Brian :) I'm glad you stopped by.

[Terpsichore]

Love and chocolate inextricably entwined in this excellent poem.

I like both. T

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much T :)

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

very very nice .my mouth is watering m going to get one

[Ana B.]

:D thank you vey much

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

your welcome

[Chase]

I enjoyed this piece very much. There are many words that fit well with the dynamic. I think if you went over it again and added or changed a few things that it could be even better :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you Decebel.

[Chase]

But of course.

[Daisy]

wonderful description ....... great job

[Ana B.]

Thanks Daisy :)

[R Smith]

weaving chocolate delight with tender romance, your sweetness is seen here giving us a special treat, to bathe in the sensual candy coated dreams, what pleasure! :)

[Ana B.]

:) I am glad you could enjoy Richard, thank you very much!

[SleeplessVolcano]

Oh bittersweet delight, these words. Sadly, I lost my childlike fondness for chocolate one day, decades ago.....maybe I grew up, maybe it was a pre-life crisis.....LOL.....but now I just eat chocolate because it is there......maybe I need to collect poems like this one to try and resurrect that ability of mood-enhancing chocolate delight! Care to write one about Turkish Delight? :P

[Ana B.]

ha ha lol, well, certainly why not......i love chocolate, so maybe this way i'll just never grow up....who knows....thank you for stopping by SV :)

[SleeplessVolcano]

Agreed.....being adult is overrated.....I want to be six again! :)

[Ana B.]

:) well.... a piece of chocolate and a pair of sunglasses can rectify the situation lol...