I was...

Take me home my chimerical dream

From these burning flames of paradise…

Don’t want to be a part of this scheme

Got enough phantoms to idolize…

 

Half of my heart is ashes scattered in the wind

Restlessly caressing the face of the ground…

The other half’s a lyre artfully stringed

Singing in longing for the love that I found…

 

Another one will heal this void.

I will forget this paradise at any cost

Even if my heart now is ‘’annoyed’’

I will stop being someone’s ghost…

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[catwoman]

it is a really nice poem..it's so heartfelt..i really life it :)

[Ana B.]

I am very glad you liked it. Thank you CatWoman :)

[nazia]

What an amazing perception Ana. Loved the way you divided the heart into pieces and distributed/ scattered it.
A very creative work :)

[Ana B.]

I'm glad you liked it Nazia. Actually i was inspired by a song....

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ek4WVJSk2W4

[Saddam]

Simple yet great perpetuation .
Love that one.

[Ana B.]

Thank you my dear :)

[Saddam]

Welcome dear.

[AaronFreitas]

Very good poem Ana.... an honest piece that I enjoyed :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you my friend :)

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem tone honest and direct.
"Even if my heart now is ‘’annoyed’’
I will stop being someone’s ghost…"
The ending told the final act. Thank you Ana for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ana B.]

Thank you dear John :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Ana.

[sereenaoutloud]

"got enough phantoms to idolize! love this line. Great strong piece again Ana!

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much :)

[Jamestown]

Very strong message, again prolific wording and flow!
The last line screams, love the intensity of this piece!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Ana B.]

Thanks for reading my friend :)