I was...

Take me home my chimerical dream

From these burning flames of paradise…

Don’t want to be a part of this scheme

Got enough phantoms to idolize…

 

Half of my heart is ashes scattered in the wind

Restlessly caressing the face of the ground…

The other half’s a lyre artfully stringed

Singing in longing for the love that I found…

 

Another one will heal this void.

I will forget this paradise at any cost

Even if my heart now is ‘’annoyed’’

I will stop being someone’s ghost…

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

very nice i liked it very much .

[Ana B.]

Thank you Harpreet.

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

welcome mam

[Daisy]

you have a world of imagination........... good job

[Ana B.]

I'm glad you like it, thank you :)

[R Smith]

Half of my heart is ashes scattered in the wind
Restlessly caressing the face of the ground…
The other half’s a lyre artfully stringed
Singing in longing for the love that I found…

Absolutely stunning Ana, another for my Ana Library, your work is beyond compare :)

[Ana B.]

:) Your praise is beyond compare my dear friend. Thank you so much for them Richard :D

[Deepika]

Beautiful work Ana :) 'I will forget this paradise at any cost' this line is very intense!

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Deepika :)

[Emily]

'Take me home my chimerical dream'
I love this line!
Keep it up!

[Ana B.]

Thank you Emilly :)

[Chris]

I can "see" the image standing at a precipice' edge and hear the tones riding the night aerie. A power-full draw to that void in our view... and the foot so wants to take ...TAKE... that step.

[Ana B.]

I am glad you could ''see'' my dear.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

amazing.......
passionate beautiful writing........
i loved it!!!
:)

[Ana B.]

Thank you my friend :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome..........!!! :) :)

[ANTO]

And so it ends in a blaze - paradise lost, not found.

We can be ghosts even when we are living until we find a love that makes us feel corporeal again.
This is a sad one Ana. But beautifully penned nonetheless as always.

[Ana B.]

:) well.....without sadness we wouldn't know the price of joy....thank you ANTO :)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

wind..paradise...flames....how beautiful you make these words count.... another good one...

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much my friend :)

[Matching Socks]

The heart mends, moves on, and finds new love.
Very heartfelt.

[Ana B.]

Thank you my dear friend:)

[Matching Socks]

Always a pleasure! :)