Je te veux

 

Breathing in your smell

Into my hungry lungs…

        Making me melt

     As we slow dance…

                               In the silence that surrounds us

                               Haunted by secret wishes…

                               Eyes that vividly discuss

                               Serving delicious kisses…

                                                                       I don’t understand this language

                                                                       Yet I know how to speak it…

                                                                       Temptation savage

                                                                       Enjoying a piece of resistance…

             

 When fire with fire is playing

Who will get burn?

Flickers conveying

A point with no return…

                                                        

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Love the intention and sentiment in this Ana. A few suggestions to assist the flow:

Breathing in your smell
Breathing your smell

Enjoying a piece of resistance…
Enjoying resistance…

Who will get burn?
Who will get burnt?

A point with no return
The point of no return

[Ana B.]

Thank you John.

[ANTO]

Nothing is like the scent of a lover Ana. It plays the olfactory senses like a lute and charges the brain with renewed vigour and heightens all the other senses in anticipation.
"I dont know this language yet I know how to speak it" - we are hard-wired for reception and transmission of the language of love. It just takes the correct frequencies to be attuned by both to make sweet music.
The passion is afire in this one - the choice of font and colour again conveying so much more. Its a dream write. !!
Thanks for the RR my friend :))

[Ana B.]

:)) thank you for making me smile yet again my dear friend.

[ANTO]

Your writing is enrapturing - the pleasure is all mines Ana -
:))

[Ana B.]

well then, i have one more coming up in a few :D lol

[ANTO]

Keep them coming - Its a great way to spend a Sunday evening - thank you very much :))