A song

 There was a soul

Splintered in two hearts

And so to be whole

This is where the journey starts.

On a warm day of spring

Under the caress of the sun

A heart began to sing

It seemed to no one…

Doesn’t that heart know

Whom does it sing to?

With a silent glow…

Running out of truth?

Because every time

The wind carried the song

To the only one

Who could sing along…

Untouched by the time

The hearts had their way

Deciding the rhyme

And which law to obey…

At the end of the time…or the day

From distant points in universe

Even if they were going astray

The hearts were singing the same verse…

Dreaming in colors

 Each night they went to sleep

With stars as their covers

About the day they’ll finally meet.

 

 

 

Author's Note

Inspired by A. Vivaldi's wonderful music.

Reviews

[nazia]

A beautiful song Ana. Soul mate.. not easily found but turns your life around the moment they enter it. Enchanting :)

[Ana B.]

:) Agreed. Thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem. I like the myth of soul-mates. Two people destine to become one.
"Even if they were going astray
The hearts were singing the same verse…"
Would be nice to find soul-mate. Someone who want to walk the same path and is content. Thank you dear Ana for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ana B.]

I'm glad you liked my dear friend :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I did. I always enjoy your words.

[Confuser]

Ana: It is amazing, beautiful! You are a phenomenal writer. Bravo...Thank you. Dale

[Ana B.]

Thank you my friend :)

[Confuser]

You're welcome my dear friend...

[GreenEyedPoet]

Beautiful piece Ana, it was an enjoyable read. :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much.

[GreenEyedPoet]

Welcome. :)

[hardeep sabharwal]

Very nicely read, I can relate to it, I love the way you expressed, well done

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much.

[Lyndy]

Oh, I love this poem! It's wonderful and well written. :D

[Ana B.]

Thank you Lyndy!

[AaronFreitas]

Are you writing about meeting me? haha I'm just kidding my friend :) another great piece Ana!

[Ana B.]

:D one can never know....thanks my friend :)

[Jamestown]

Beautiful write, the last stanza I relate to a lot! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Ana B.]

Thank you my friend!

[Lizardo]

Wow, what a wonderful poem this is! Sometimes, we can communicate by music... and we feel like the other person is hearing it or listening to our thoughts too. A grea song that travels throught the cosmos..
Thats an awesome imagination you have there, and the last part, it would be a great story if you ever write it, I pictuted in my head, a girl and boy watching the stars at night eagerly waiting for the day they'll meet. Grea pome Ana, Enjoyable poem. By the way, sorry I haven't review your stuff, but I'm on it right now :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Lizardo for the most sweet words :)

[anne]

woowwwwww...lovely read..beauty..

[Ana B.]

Thank you my dear :)