A song

 There was a soul

Splintered in two hearts

And so to be whole

This is where the journey starts.

On a warm day of spring

Under the caress of the sun

A heart began to sing

It seemed to no one…

Doesn’t that heart know

Whom does it sing to?

With a silent glow…

Running out of truth?

Because every time

The wind carried the song

To the only one

Who could sing along…

Untouched by the time

The hearts had their way

Deciding the rhyme

And which law to obey…

At the end of the time…or the day

From distant points in universe

Even if they were going astray

The hearts were singing the same verse…

Dreaming in colors

 Each night they went to sleep

With stars as their covers

About the day they’ll finally meet.

 

 

 

Author's Note

Inspired by A. Vivaldi's wonderful music.

Reviews

[Terrence Chang]

Another good write Ana. Lovely wordings in your write

[Ana B.]

Thank you my friend!

[Terrence Chang]

You're welcome Ana. But it kind of remind me of my own writing called Soul Suicide

[stansg]

Great work Ana. I love the idea that two people who are destined to be together will somehow end up together; although i'm not sure if it is universally applicable to everyone.

Because every time
The wind carried the song
To the only one
Who could sing along…

I loved this line, i could vividly visualize it. Great Work.

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much :)

[Daisy]

great one ............. wonderful as usual ana

[Ana B.]

thank you :)

[ANTO]

This reminded me of the birds at Spring - in their eagerness (or their PonFarr lol) to find a mate they are singing their little hearts out from the first inkling of dawn. It can become so loud as they try to outdo one another but they dont even know who they are singing for. Just that 'the one' for them is 'out there'. So sing the must and sing they do, like this heart you have written of here.
Its a gorgeous song Ana.
:))

[Ana B.]

Thank you for the sweet words ANTO :)

[ANTO]

your welcome Ana. My pleasure. :)

[R Smith]

a song lyric is something i have often wished to do, i always end up slipping into poetry format, so i applaud you here Ana as you have achieved something special, its a lovely song and the inspiration of Vivaldi is beautiful :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you for the wonderful words my dear. I love classical music.....a great muse for a song.....

[Emily]

Love that first line!
Well done!

[Ana B.]

thanks Emily :)

[Saddam]

Wonderful they are!
Fab with those emotions.

[Ana B.]

Thank you my dear !

[Saddam]

Welcome dear............

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Again you mixed nature and emotions... deep!!

[Ana B.]

Thank you !

[Matching Socks]

I love the inspiration behind this Ana. :)
Time and distance are no obstacle when it comes to love.
Sometimes they might even be a good thing.
I like this one.

[Ana B.]

I'm glad you apprciated this Ana, thank you for the sweet words...Love is timeless and spaceless...at least this is what i wan tto believe...

[Matching Socks]

I agree Ana. :)
And you are welcome!

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

its very very nice . i realy liked it.

[Ana B.]

Thank you !

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

always welcome