Powerless

Can’t say yes

                To your enveloping embrace…

Cannot agree

                With your sugar covered trickery

Cannot control

                 These tiny shivers of cold…

Can’t foresee

                 What you do to me…

Cannot confess

                 Am I lonely…or obsessed…

Can’t stop

               Once you started this plot

Can’t say yes

                 To the warmest caress

Can’t say no

                  When you ask me if you should go…

                

 

Reviews

[Terrence Chang]

Great Write Ana. Loved it with it's a unique style that you present and it's wonderful

[Ana B.]

The sweetest words....thank you Terrence!

[Terrence Chang]

You're welcome Ana

[MsJewel]

Perhaps it is love....

:) Julie

[Ana B.]

Perhaps it is, thank you Julie :)

[Mayank]

This is what we call 'love'
Love is sweet obsession.

[Ana B.]

yes it is, thank you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. Nice when the answers are hopeful and positive. Nice flow of thoughts leading to a very good ending. Thank you Ana for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much dear John.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Ana.

[Daisy]

so true............... good job

[Ana B.]

Thanks Daisy .

[R Smith]

a stunner Ana, just the style and the way you begin each line is original enough to get my praise but of course the writing is magnificent too :)

[Ana B.]

:) I am thrilled you liked it Richard. It was an unexpected write for me actually....

[R Smith]

haha i know that feeling, had a lot of unexpected write's in my time :)

[Ana B.]

:) well, the unexpected is a beautiful reminder of how much is yet to do....

[R Smith]

well said, i'm right with you there :)

[Emily]

Love it!
My favorite of yours!
Keep it up!

[Ana B.]

Thank you Emily :)

[Saddam]

Well!!!!!!!!! This is marvelous.
Great write dear.

[Ana B.]

Thank you !!

[Saddam]

Welcome dear

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!
beautiful poem.......
clever and creative writing......
i loved it!!!
:)

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Pushkar :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome!!! :) :)

[Moonie]

I could feel the intoxicating and obsessive passion in this one, perhaps of a bitter-sweet relationship. I can definitely feel the confused emotions of the narrator. Amazing poem! :))

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much my friend for stopping by :)