Jealousy

                                           I’m jealous of the Rain

      For it can wash away

      The weakness and the pain

                                           That comes our way…

I’m jealous of the Wind

For it can travel any space

From a warm breath of mint

To a sweet and familiar face…

I’m jealous of the Sun

For it’s not afraid of the dark

Irreplaceable for everyone

Starting life from a little spark…

I’m jealous of the Moon

For it has seen the greatest stories

And will witness some others soon

Cause she’s the keeper of the world’s undying glories

 

I’m jealous of the Sky

This ‘’ant hill’s’’ vault

Having a world to occupy

And sometimes crying tears of salt

 

I’m jealous of the Birds

For they can pierce the air.

And are able to fly towards

The sun, the moon…and anywhere

I’m jealous of the Heart

That is brave and fearless

Waiting for the love to start

Unafraid of failure, or of success…

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Terrence Chang]

What an envious poem you have posted. Great write Ana.

[Ana B.]

Thank you a lot Terrence :)

[Daisy]

great poem well done ana....

[Ana B.]

Thank you Daisy :)

[R Smith]

i'm jealous of your superb writing Ana, also you used invention of the printed word, i tend to stick to straight lines, bit boring i guess, your lines tell much about the world and space that surrounds us, bravo :)

[Ana B.]

lol, and i am jealous of yours, so its a fait game :D Thank you very much Richard for always finding time and words for my work :) And no ''boring'' association with your work...tsk tsk...

[Abilash Uttama]

there is so much we need to learn from nature, A wonderful poem as always Ma'am and one more thing you are looking gorgeous in your pic, you always do :)

[Ana B.]

:) oh thank you very much for the compliments Mr.

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Another brilliant piece... your work always revolve around the nature and that makes your work even more special... i enjoyed it a lot....

[Ana B.]

Thank you a lot !

[Emily]

Vary well written!
Well done!

[Ana B.]

thank you :)

[KelWriter]

I'm jealous of the birds the most!!! I swear every time I see a bird land it looks at me with a face like "bet you wish you could do that dontcha!" :) Great poem!

[Ana B.]

lol, thank you very much Kel :D

[GreenEyedPoet]

This is a beautiful piece! Love the descriptions you gave. :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you very muh GEP :)

[NishaPooh]

if you are younger than 13 you are wise beyond your age!

[Ana B.]

ha ha, try 13+10 :)

[NishaPooh]

well you're still pretty wise xD

[Melinda McQueen]

Oh my. I absolutely love this! It was an unending flow that drifted deeper and deeper. I took note of the GREEN font... nicely done!

[Ana B.]

:) thank you very much for the insight Melinda :)