a wishing heart

I found a Goddess in the ruins…

When I was dreaming on the top of the world…

Her beauty more precious than any rubies

And her splendor finer than any emerald…

 

I wish I was as gentle and as gracious

As is this rainbow full of fragrant petals

Caressing and gifting purity to this mendacious

And starving dimension on so many levels

 

The secret life of daydreams…

Knocking swiftly at its door…

Even if dreams are always far it seems

I will never stop wishing, for there is so much more…

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[B]

Truly magical
Your pen has a touch of fairy dust

[Ana B.]

Thank you my dear :)

[Daisy]

wow great one.... well it's good to hope then to be depressed.... good one

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Daisy :)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

the last para made this poem more beautiful .... nice write.....

[Ana B.]

i'm glad you liked :)

[R Smith]

Hi Ana, I love this poem, like a tale from ancient Greece it begins, I see The Gods playing with our lives and us with our little daydreams that they decide but always keep wishing Ana, you're right there is so much more.
I see i'm getting miles behind on my RRs, i have been trying to figure out how to publish a book on Amazon createspace when i don't have Microsoft Word, it seems its impossible, I guess Microsoft is the great God of word processing and i aint getting published without it, will attempt to catch up on the RRs very soon :)

[Ana B.]

wow, that's great news Richard, don't worry about RR, i'm sure they're not getting anywhere. Thank you for your time and hope you're gonna publish that book.....
P.S. MWord is a treasure sometimes :)

[R Smith]

I'll always try to read and review so please keep sending, I'd hate to miss one of your poems :)

[Ana B.]

Will do :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A hopeful and beautiful poem dear Ana.
"The secret life of daydreams…
Knocking swiftly at its door…
Even if dreams are always far it seems
I will never stop wishing, for there is so much more…"
When we lose our want of dream. What is left? I enjoyed the complete poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ana B.]

Thank you for the insight John :) A dreamless life is a sunless day......it's possible to live through it....but it feels like a waste......

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Ana.

[wordman]

wishes and dreams are a important part of our lives,great write

[Ana B.]

thank you Wordman :)

[wordman]

my pleasure

[Aasia]

wishes is very important in life, but some wishes always hurt you when you remember them they bring tears in eyes but still life is nothing without wishes and dreams. love it. keep writing and thanks for sharing this with us.

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much for stopping by Aasia :)

[Confuser]

Ana: This is so, so Beautiful....I LOVE>>LOVE>>>LOVE it!!! You are an amazing writer.....Smiling....Thank you so so very much!!! Dale

[Ana B.]

:D I love your review Dale, thank you!

[Confuser]

Ana: you my dear are very talented. Wow & YOUR WELCOME!!!

[Emily]

You always start your poem off so well!
Well done!
Keep it up!

[Ana B.]

thank you Emily :)

[nazia]

Wish all good that you can my friend, we know not which one comes true. A prolific write Ana :)

[Ana B.]

:) hope so my friend, thank you very much !