Warning

Here I am. Stuck in the spider web

Of my own making…

You’re moving through the dream I’ve kept

That is yours for the taking.

 

No matter what you see

Don’t fall in love with me.

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[ANTO]

Its not often that a woman of such substance carries her own bell to ring in advance like the plague carriers of olde and it says so much about the speakers concern for others over their own happiness. The right one would silence that bell and ring altogether happier ones, methinks.
This was another class poem. :)

[Ana B.]

ha ha, i really hope you're right, i'm open to the alternatives :D thanks for the insight ANTO

[....................]

Such a wonderful pen. Beware, indeed - "No matter what you see/Don't fall in love with me". Such great lines that show the speaker has a deep self-understanding and compassion enough to warn the other to stay away.

[Ana B.]

i'm glad you liked it, thank you for the insight FT Ledrew :)

[Lyndy]

I like this poem very much! I can relate to this though. hahaha. :D

[Ana B.]

lol, thanks Lyndy :)

[Saddam]

Exactly the same her.
I am also in my web which i have made.
Just beautiful. And how can anyone prevent themselves for falling in love with one?

[Ana B.]

:) well, there is no escape i suppose....thank you for stopping by Saddam.

[Saddam]

You're most welcome as always.