Choir

No Apocalypse please…

I think it’s enough

So many Horsemen in these

lives … lacking in love.

In this forest is easy to get lost…

The night is darker when being alone

So this meadow may be my host

Yet this beautiful world is my home.

 

 

Reviews

[R Smith]

Again Ana a wonderful write, to see the horsemen would bring an end to our lives as we know them, although the change would eventually bring new life, it would seem better to hide in the forest to avoid the night, the beautiful world is your home now and will forever be long after the horsemen have rode away, lovely :)

[Ana B.]

:) Thank you my dear and kind reader :)

[~]

Tell me about it Ana. Where are all the good gentlemen when you need them? :):)

[Ana B.]

where indeed....thank you MS :D

[Jamestown]

Oh Ana, again you make poetry look easy!
Great flowing write that has rich imagery
and bold message!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much my dear friend :)

[Confuser]

Ana: So lovely and clever. Yes oh yes...let's live a little longer in joy and in love - so much is missing these days and In this forest it is easy to get Lost..Love it...what wonderful imagery and the metaphor is riviting. I too would love to be in that meadow in peace; hoping there's a stream nearby I could roll into and forget everything because: Yet this beautiful world IS my HOME! We all deserve this peace. Thank you so very much! Dale

[Ana B.]

I can easily envision myself rolling down a hill full of beautiful flowers....this world is real beautiful, thank you for sharing your joy Dale :) its contageous :D

[Confuser]

You inspire me sweet girl!!

[ANTO]

Wow Ana - I got to thinking based on the line about the Horsemen - what if the Horsemen arent only 4 but 4 for every person in a personal apocalypse for each and everyone of us - and if thats just a re-hash of what you were saying here then I will *smack* my own botty for stating the glaringly obvious (again).

The image you chose is somewhere I'd like to be right now as the waving sun paints the sky mauve. Lying on the grass dancing. Yes dancing, lying down and laughing with someone who liked to dance too - laughing at the moves we were doing.

No Apocalypse please - simple but heartfelt and says so much about the author. Great write Ana. :)

[Ana B.]

Well, i always thought that Apocalypse is of our own making....besides, translated from Ancient Greek means the time when the hidden(truth) will be revealed....so in this meaning i'd guess Apocalypse please....yet, living in this dimension one has to adjust to the world's meaning...i looove nature, my grandma tought me to collect mushrooms...which became one of my favorite outdoor activities.....
Thank you for stopping by my friend ;)

[ANTO]

Ahh - thank you for explaining - I deeply appreciate your time Ana. Collecting mushrooms sounds like a beautiful pastime and one that keeps one grounded. What a wonderful skill to pass down.
Always a pleasure. :)

[Ana B.]

It is a very pleasant activity :) I also want to learn playing some guitar......but that's for another life i guess :D
Enjoy your day my friend ;)

[ANTO]

Could I suggest one thing. In your other life (Im sorry i didnt go down this route myself0 - Learn the ukelele first. Its quite a cool little instrument and easier to learn and wont cause as many blisters on the finger tips
Have a great day too Ana :))

[Ana B.]

:) will do , thanks ANTO :D

[nazia]

This is your first work that I read and its flawless.. The entire framework of the poem is beautiful.. Looking forward to read more of your work :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much for the beautiful words Nazia :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the night is darker when being alone, but as you say...there is a beautiful world out there, and that is our home...and needs no one else for us to feel the peace if we just embrace it.

[Ana B.]

true words my friend. thank you for stopping by.

[Terrence Chang]

Sweet, short and fantastic. I actually paused for a while after I read it. Flawless writing. Keep posting cause I am loving your poems

[Ana B.]

:D Thank you greatly

[Terrence Chang]

Your welcome Ana