Comely Dream

Comely Dream

A Poem by Ana B.

It’s a beautiful day in a beautiful world.

No painted wincing on this tableau

Just a serene soul, gracefully adorned

With a bright Sun, with no shadow.

In such days, no love is diluted…

No minds are polluted…

No words are needed

No thoughts are heeded…

Chocolate raindrops

For a heart full of hopes…

And a hidden smile

I want to stay here a while.

 

 

 

 

© 2015 Ana B.


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Oh Wow - 'comely' is such a beautiful word - it abounds in Irish singing and storytelling and immediately made me connect with this one. Kudos for the use of 'comely' Ana.

You paint a wonderful oasis here - a utopian refuge not unlike what I imagine mythical "Shang-ri-la" would be in reality. This is what my therapist would call "your nice place" which is a useful image to have in the armoury of the depressive or anxious, to repair to and meditate.

No wonder you want to stay there a while.

I predict with the emerging virtual reality technology that more people will repair to such alternative realities in preference to real-world interactions and a new era - the age of the hermit will come about due to the badness in the real world.

But thats for another day and another discussion. This is beautiful Ana. Thank you for the RR for this one. :))

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ana B.

9 Years Ago

Thank you ANTO for liking my refuge. I think you're right, very many people would much prefer an alt.. read more
Just a serene soul, gracefully adorned
With a bright Sun, with no shadow.
In such days, no love is diluted…
Gorgeous! Dale

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ana B. It is beautiful; breathtaking; The title says it all: Comely Dream. Who wouldn't want to be in this lovely place you have created; for my mind remembers this table and this time; only glimmers now and then but spring is on the way: I love it all but maybe this is my favorite:
No minds are polluted…
No words are needed
No thoughts are heeded…
Chocolate raindrops
For a heart full of hopes…
Thank you so much. Dale

Posted 9 Years Ago


Confuser

9 Years Ago

You're welcome. Keep smiling, okay? & Y/W: Dale
Ana B.

9 Years Ago

ALWAYS. And you do the same :)
Confuser

9 Years Ago

Thank you: I am NOW!!!!

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