Comely Dream

It’s a beautiful day in a beautiful world.

No painted wincing on this tableau

Just a serene soul, gracefully adorned

With a bright Sun, with no shadow.

In such days, no love is diluted…

No minds are polluted…

No words are needed

No thoughts are heeded…

Chocolate raindrops

For a heart full of hopes…

And a hidden smile

I want to stay here a while.

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[CA Anurag Sharma]

"For a heart full of hopes…
And a hidden smile
I want to stay here a while".....
lovely write up.... good one

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much.

[Daisy]

yup such a nice dream........ :) for a while that is ans after that....
great job ana it's wonderful

[Ana B.]

Thank you Daisy :)

[Deepika]

Aww..the imagination of 'chocolate raindrops' was so delightful :D Nice write :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you Deepika :)

[MsJewel]

Such a beautiful dream..

:) julie

[Ana B.]

Thank you Julie :)

[Jamestown]

Beautiful write! Love this a ton! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much James.

[Nene]

When I read 'chocolate raindrops' a picture of chocolate pouring from the sky like came into my mind....mmmmmmm yummmyyy... I want chocolate!!!...
Its a lovely poem... I liked the way it went on....
Just a serene soul, gracefully adorned
Love this line

[Ana B.]

:) I'm thrilled you liked it, thank you Nene

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and hopeful words in the poem. I enjoyed the energy and positive feel of the words. Thank you Ana for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much John :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Emily]

I just really like your poems today!
Well done!
Keep it up!

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Emily :)

[Saddam]

For a heart full of hopes…
And a hidden smile
I want to stay here a while.

Its wonderful write. I want to stay here for long. Great............

[Ana B.]

Thank you my dear :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i am looking up with open mouth...trying to catch those "chocolate raindrops"
so i can catch them and stir them within to get that taste of hope so eloquently conveyed here.

[Ana B.]

:) Thank you very much Jacob!