Comely Dream

It’s a beautiful day in a beautiful world.

No painted wincing on this tableau

Just a serene soul, gracefully adorned

With a bright Sun, with no shadow.

In such days, no love is diluted…

No minds are polluted…

No words are needed

No thoughts are heeded…

Chocolate raindrops

For a heart full of hopes…

And a hidden smile

I want to stay here a while.

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Shadow Paradox]

I mean with the amazing beautiful imagery you've painted here, I wouldn't want to leave either. Chocolate raindrops, I love that metaphor. I would instantly enter into Dreamland if this was being read to me out loud. Overall this piece is graceful and full of peace. I love it!!!

[Ana B.]

Thank you for the sweet review dear Jezi :)

[Shadow Paradox]

You are very welcome :)

[Willis Walker]

Some incredible imagery here. My personal favourite line is:
"Just a serene soul, gracefully adorned with a bright sun with no shadow".

Read that over and over. Such a touching line.

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much for the beautiful words Willis :)

[nenakris]

Wow.. This poem provides an escape for many.. Beautiful!

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much :)

[nenakris]

Wow.. This poem provides an escape for many.. Beautiful!

[Shari Robinson]

Thanks for the lovely poem with it's wonderful imagery. Chocolate raindrops...yes!

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Shari

[Shivam Murari]

Everybody would love to dip their feet in those waters and this genius of a poem makes it happen somehow. I already feel light. Thanks for the beautiful poem.

[Ana B.]

Thank you :)

[AaronFreitas]

Lovely peaceful write. Sounds like a beautiful place to just relax and enjoy life for what it is and not all the stress and problems :)

[Ana B.]

It does, thank you Aaron :)

[Arline]

Such a lovely piece :) It holds such innocence and love. I especially loved the sweet taste of 'chocolate raindrops' lol seriously I would love to live in a world where that happens hahah XD Anyways great job and hope to read more from ya.

[Ana B.]

Thank you for your sweetness Artine :)

[armin]

lovely piece, i would like to stay there lol.
Really a beautiful write.

No minds are polluted…
No words are needed
No thoughts are heeded…

wow, well written i loved those lines.

armin. ...

[Ana B.]

Thank you a lot Armin :)

[R Smith]

who would not want to stay there a while sounds like heaven to me, more beautiful writing Ana, you are a fountain of light and sweet words, superb :)

[Ana B.]

thank you very much dear Richard, i guess spring makes me giddy :D