Endless

You’re on to me, all over me so smoothly

My heart drunk from the alluring wine

Because when you get lost in the beauty

Everything becomes quickly outshined.

 

Should I speak before my time …

I’m too young and yet to be astute

But all the beauty isn’t worth a dime

If you gave up the pursuit.

 

Exploring the Choice Kingdom…

Gate by golden gate…

Paying with Time for the  Wisdom

Occasionally questioning  Fate.

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[R Smith]

you're lover needs to wise up, you are completely in deep, being young can lead to heartbreak when one uses the other then gives them away just when they feel secure in their love, the Kingdom is that happy world when every barrier comes down and emotions run wild but if one gives it all up then yes the other must pay and the lessons from this fate give the wisdom in love's to come. A most remarkable write Ana, you have a matchless beauty, I must keep this in my library to live and relive the beautiful verses :)

[Ana B.]

Oh what a great way to start my day - by reading this beautiful , wonderful review. It's an honor being in your library Richard :) Thank you!

[R Smith]

you're very welcome Ana, i'm honoured to help you start your day so well, thank you for your great writing :)

[AaronFreitas]

Very good piece Ana.... great message behind these words. Thanks for sharing :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you for reading Aaron:)

[Saddam]

Its very nice rhythmic and beautifully written subject. Great as always.

Paying with Time for the Wisdom
Occasionally questioning Fate.

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much dear :)

[Deepika]

Nice rhyme scheme and great use of words. Good Job Ana :))

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Deepika:)

[MsJewel]

I love the message here...but more than that the emotion I can feel in your words.
Very well written Ana.

:) Julie

[Ana B.]

when you know about love only in theory, you have just.....words...thank for the sweet words Julie :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the title and the description in the poetry.
"Because when you get lost in the beauty
Everything becomes quickly outshined."
Fate and question. Things we must learn and pay for with time and living. Thank you Ana for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much dear John :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Ana.

[Emily]

I like the meaning!
Keep it up!

[Ana B.]

Thank you Emily!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

once she is deflowered, is he still interested..?
sometimes the chase is all he is interested in...the conquest...
then she is left to wonder, "was it all worth it? was he?"

he no longer pursues and she has nowhere to run.

[Ana B.]

tragoc moments my dear....

[Daisy]

great one ana..... good job it's wonderful :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you Daisy!

[Jamestown]

Great flowing write! This has beautiful imagery and much truth, the last two lines were my favorite
but a close second would be, beauty isn't worth a dime, if you gave up the pursuit, luv it, luv it!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much for liking it James!