Endless

You’re on to me, all over me so smoothly

My heart drunk from the alluring wine

Because when you get lost in the beauty

Everything becomes quickly outshined.

 

Should I speak before my time …

I’m too young and yet to be astute

But all the beauty isn’t worth a dime

If you gave up the pursuit.

 

Exploring the Choice Kingdom…

Gate by golden gate…

Paying with Time for the  Wisdom

Occasionally questioning  Fate.

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[armin]

Questioning fate, i loved it.
It's very well written.
Well done Ana.

armin. ...

[Ana B.]

Thank you Armin :)

[Mayank]

Wonderful work Ana...
"But all the beauty isn’t worth a dime
If you gave up the pursuit." -- loved this line!

[Ana B.]

Thank you my dear friend!

[sonnie ibadah]

"...Should I speak before my time …
I’m too young and yet to be astute
But all the beauty isn’t worth a dime
If you gave up the pursuit." i feel the confusion in this. well penned emotions!

[Ana B.]

I'm glad you liked it Sonnie, thank you :)

[Abilash Uttama]

Wonderful message, beautifully written. it's always a pleasure to read your work Ma'am :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much my dear :)

[Lyndy]

This is a beautifully written poem. A job well done. :)

[Ana B.]

I'm glad you liked it. Thank you!

[Ehra Khan]

A peice with really strong flow of emotions and a very important message! You have made some facts of life poetically clear!great write Ma'am:)

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much :)

[Nene]

I love this line.....
But all the beauty isn't worth a dime
If you gave up the persuit....
People do things for a reason and if that reasons ceases to exist there's no reason left to do them... That is why there's a big difference between ...'I love you because I need you' and 'I need you because I love you'

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much!

[Mason Red]

Really love the poem. Not a word is left useless, everything adds to it. I like the broad theme and philosophy behind it -- it's wise, really. And it is told so you can instantly believe it, and see the bigger picture when you're actually worrying about the little things that don't even seem to matter anymore, but only after. Cheers, Vince

[Ana B.]

Thanks for the lovely review Vince :)

[Daffodils]

Very good work Ms. Ana. Keep it up. God's speed :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you :)

[stars are far]

That was very well written and i loved " questioning fate" as we all have that time where we do. but that was penned well ,have a nice day

[Ana B.]

Thank you for stopping by SAF :)