Complicated simplicity

How many secrets can one hide?

Yours are so well cloaked. I tried.

Waiting for each other…stretching this infinity

Trying as ever to outsmart the laws of gravity…

 

Fear can’t stop me…even if it makes me stumble…

Believing the edges of this world are starting to crumble…

But pain’s an illusion,

Astounding confusion…

Inspired by me and my demons…

Hopelessly denying all the reasons…

 

How many secrets can one hide?

Mine are so well cloaked. I know you tried.

 

I wish I told you what I need…but as ever… I’m clueless

Caught up in beauty, fear and distress

Find the truth if you must, when you do - come home.

Because this life’s a dream I cannot dream alone.

 

Reviews

[sonnie ibadah]

i'm speechless! it's like u were writing about me....to me. i love it!

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much!

[sonnie ibadah]

i'm speechless! it's like u were writing about me....to me. i love it!

[Chris]

The title fits... life's collage isn't a static mastering of any "single" dimension - it's the gestalt of our world at every now.

[Ana B.]

that is exactly what i love in life :)

[Nene]

I liked the poem... Its a very nice piece.... No one can dream alone... We humans, no matter how much some people are reserved, cannot live without the one another...
My favourite line is
How many secrets can one hide?
Mine are so well cloaked, i know you tried

[Ana B.]

Thank you for saying so Nene!

[Cool Girl]

This was so much fun to read! The rhymes are very good and made the words flow nicely :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you CG for being so sweet :)

[Cool Girl]

You're welcome! :)

[Mayank]

rhymes are really good here, i liked the second verse most...

[Ana B.]

Thank you :)

[Saddam]

Inspired by me and my demons…
Hopelessly denying all the reasons…

Its fantastic write dear. Just good as the rhythm.
Well done and a good read.

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much dear :)

[Saddam]

Welcome always.............

[Emily]

That first line really drags me in!
Well done!
Keep it up!

[Ana B.]

Will do, thanks Emily!

[R Smith]

excellent rhyming Ana, another effortless poem from you, it seems poetry flows in your blood, i'm sure you'll never dream alone :)

[Ana B.]

:) Sure hope not....thank you for the wonderful words Richard :)

[armin]

a good one, i liked the rhyming scheme and flow of the poem.

Fear can’t stop me…even if it makes mestumble…Believing the edges of this world are starting to crumble…

That was my favorite part.
Well done.

armin. ...

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Armin :)