Confessions to the moon

 

Teach me the art of letting go,

My Midnight Queen.

This heart is a toy I want to throw.

It doesn’t make my eyes gleam.

 

All I do is Dream of you…

Sitting in that moonlight chapel.

I know, I know, white was never my hue…

Couldn’t resist biting from the Forbidden Apple…

 

Sway me slow

My Midnight Queen.

Unbending somehow…

I am stuck in between.

 

I’ve got fissures in my eyes

My Midnight Queen.

Beloved a devil in disguise.

When I thought his heart was pristine.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Chris]

Dancin' in the moon'slight. The mind goes so many places while it mulls possibilities - some it didn't even think it saw.

What I like of this is how you speak from behind your eyes.

[Ana B.]

That one is a difficult language - the one behind the eyes. Thanks for stopping by Chris.

[Chris]

Difficult? Not really, but it does require finding someone that listens because they want to - without having had to be told to. Today is a bright and sunny awaiting the snowfalling... you can FEEL the snow coming. Chuckling here.

[Ana B.]

hmmm...perhaps.....after all, some languages don't need words. No snow here.....spring has come :)

[Chris]

ah - that heart-melting time of year... eyes aglow with - dear.

[Ana B.]

yep, that one :)

[anne]

Moves like a song my dear..beautiful...:))

[Ana B.]

Thank you dear :)

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem had the feel of song. Nice flow of words led the reader to places and deep thoughts. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry dear Ana.
Coyote

[Ana B.]

Thank you for always writing inspiring reviews my dear :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Ana. My pleasure to read your words and thoughts.

[Saddam]

All I do is Dream of you…
Sitting in that moonlight chapel.

Starting and end both are the heads and toe and its middle like heart.
Full body beauty write here.
Cool write as the moon light.

[Ana B.]

Thank you my dear!

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

I loved the metaphors and the beautiful flow of words of this poem, Ana B.!
You have captured the pain and hurt from a betrayal and lost love so very beautifully.
Very well done! I loved it! Thanks for sharing! :)
-Anjana

[Ana B.]

Thank you for the beautiful words Anjana!

[AaronFreitas]

Beautiful and creative way to describe heart break! I really enjoyed reading it and definitely felt the pain that lies deep in those words. "beloved a devil in disguise when I thought his heart was pristine." Love those lines.

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Aaron!

[Emily]

'Teach me the art of letting go, My Midnight Queen'
I just love this line!!
Keep it up!!

[Ana B.]

Thanks Emily!

[Abilash Uttama]

wonderful poem, i can easily feel the pain behind the words. nice work !

[Ana B.]

Thank you :)

[Roshan Nair]

I liked it a lot Ana! the piece brings dark and misty nights with the moon to mind, with the character singing to it. Great write :) cheers

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much dear :)

[Michael Rize]

I can read the heartache in your words, that drive you to reach solace with the cold and distant mysterious moon. I can see you slowly dancing in the moonlight, clutching your hands to your chest.

[Ana B.]

Thank you for stopping by Michael :)